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Moonshine Elixir

MOONSHINE ELIXIR

My rose perfume scents the hospital room
where he returns for moonshine elixir.

My eyes, wide and afraid at the pale monster
who glows with pinkish cheeks as he drinks.

I scream, from inside my brain, as my mouth
softly moans, “no...no…”

My friend strung a cross - pressed it to my heart,
but he snickered, for i’m far too close to the dark.

He forced a nurse to remove it — she wore it
to ward off the evil, that terrified my bedside.

He told her, as he licked his lips, “Keep it on,
or i’ll send you next, to the funeral parlor.”

She pulls out a hammer and a stake, “That
would be a grave mistake, monster! Watch
your back. I know where you live. Do you
have time to move before the moon is through?”

He seethes, taking it out on me, raping me
of the rest of my lifeblood. He screams
at the top of his unholy breath…

The nurse’s hair caught in its vortex, the stench
of death she can’t escape. He vanishes

and fearfully he is able to find a new residence.
She must always watch her back, be careful
that no one unhinges the clasp at the back of her neck

...not even her husband.

Each night she hears a horrible howl, the wind blows the windows
and doors, a pale reminder of the evil that stirs...

12/21/2018

See my poem Victorian Virtue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ajmal Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Wow, such a brilliant poem it is, certainly a masterpiece and a favorite for me, I absolutely love reading it especially the last line which shows the constant fear and the uncertainty, good luck and since it is 22 December today so I wish you a merry Christmas and a really happy new year
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Merry Christmas and happiness in the coming New Year! Thank you!
Kiser Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:19 PM
And shivers shimmy down my spine...great story.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Blown Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:09 PM
woe man...beauty and the beast right out of edgar allen poe ...my favorite childhood author
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Thanks!
Blown Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:11 PM
correcting my wording: ....'right out of edgar allen poe's spirit...'
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