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Moonlit Night-El

On a moonlit starry night, the stars were shining so bright. saw a lovely creek nearby, a school of fish caught my eye. Next, I laid on the earth's bed, looked up, then rested my head. On a moonlit starry night. 07-8-2021 Contest: Elemental Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/31/2021 12:11:00 PM

This is magical, Alexis. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your win. :) Evelyn

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/31/2021 10:28:00 AM

How lovely. Superb imagery. Congratulations.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 6:22:00 AM

Lovely write, Alexis. Beautifully written indeed. Congratulations on your winning poem. Hugs...Charlie

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/31/2021 7:54:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Thank you so much. You had a lot of good entries; I'm happy mines made the cut. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:38:00 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/10/2021 9:13:00 AM

A lovely place to rest one’s head Alexis. All the best for the contest… Belle

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/8/2021 8:37:00 PM

Very tranquill, love the images of the fish swimming by!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/8/2021 5:15:00 PM

Oh, this is lovely, I hope you're a winner. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2021 5:14:00 PM

So sweet, Alexis. A pure delight! Have a happy night! :) gw

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/8/2021 3:37:00 PM

Alexis, this is so so fine..... moonlit starry night is such a delight. Lovely poem. Have a great evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2021 2:14:00 PM

- A wonderful picture I see in my eyes ... the starry night, many thanks Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2021 1:16:00 PM

Ahh!! I like this one. It brings back fond memories of similar experiences. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/8/2021 9:24:00 AM

A superb write Alexis, your wording is flawless, flowing seamlessly with outstanding imagery and perfect description. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.