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Moonlight Sonata

I'm bathed in the night, as it climbs through my window While the music of moonlight softens the air It dips, oh so softly, peeking gently with care, Into the room, to lighten the gloom While a timeless sonata, of so long ago Croons the same somber notes, That have played on for years I have noticed how moonbeams, seek my attention Hanging over the garden, waiting to hear Just as a guest, would expect to come in ‘Moonlight Sonata’ has a place in my home I had practiced through childhood Though it seemed quite beyond me With small nimble fingers Less and less satisfaction I remember my mother With dishes piled high And soap on her nose Calling out from the kitchen “That time, much better!” Or my dad, in the dark room Walter Cronkite, his companion Calling out from the shadows “I think now, you've got it!” Tonight in the dim light I watch how the moonlight Slides over the piano, sliding over the keys It seems that the moon knows That time cannot stand still That years come and the years go But the tune, is the same tune, and the moon, is the same moon And the Moonlight Sonata is a place I call home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/10/2015 4:48:00 PM
This poem is so touching and beautiful Carrie. Very deserving of First Place. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Hugs, Connie
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:54:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking and beautiful, Carrie! Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 9:53:00 AM
Lovely...and the next time you bathe in the night we're all coming to peek in the window.....
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Date: 6/10/2015 12:40:00 AM
Carrie, I got one word for you, two actually. Breathtaking & Congratulations. :)
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Date: 6/10/2015 9:56:00 AM
Oh wow.....such a wonderful surprise, Skat !! Thank you very much....!!! This is a joy to find this morning!
Date: 5/3/2014 2:30:00 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:24:00 PM
Carrie, I hope you get some more peeks at this one!! it deserves it!! Congrats on your HM shared with me!!
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Date: 5/1/2014 10:51:00 PM
Wonderful write Carrie ! congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:10:00 PM
Nice win, Lady. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/4/2013 7:29:00 AM
Carrie Congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 3/3/2013 10:31:00 PM
A beautiful look into what makes practice perfect and how it all stays with us through the years. RAY
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Date: 3/3/2013 10:13:00 PM
Many many congrats for this wonderful win Carrie.
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:10:00 PM
Just beautiful, Carrie! Always pure delight to read you wonderful poems...refreshing is what it is...always! Congratulations on a very fine win in the contest. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/3/2013 4:07:00 PM
How could I ever forget this magical poem of yours, Carrie. It was one of my favorites way back when. Congrats on another win with it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2013 3:07:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win....David
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:19:00 PM
CARRIE... NICE WIN...IN CATIE'S.. CONGRATUALTIONS! ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
I love how it's used as a fixture in time, that's a powerful thing and I enjoyed your poem very much.
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:08:00 PM
Carrie, All I can say is.....Wow. Fabulous work. Congrats on placing on Catie's winners' list...........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Catie's~ "Free Verse" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:31:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a superb win for this outstanding and extraordinary write luv.. great free verse ..
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:15:00 AM
ahhh but I could tell you can not hide your charm from me ;) Congrad's on an evocative win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:43:00 AM
wow I got the shivers on the last stanza and final line. GREAT poem this is, Carrie. Is it for the free verse contest. If so, it will win big.
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Date: 2/16/2012 10:53:00 PM
Beautiful images connecting the past and present. I love this from the first line to the last and it is going in my faves. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:01:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:30:00 PM
Everybody needs a little Beethoven in their lives. Nice descriptive write here.
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Date: 2/16/2012 7:42:00 PM
What a beautiful memory, wonderfully written!
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