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9/27/2023 my heart beats for you moon in flight, casts its shadow heaven and earth, kiss

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Date: 9/29/2023 8:38:00 PM
great imagery in this Senryu. Yesterday we had the biggest image of the moon close to the horizon as it came up against the blue sky; look like it was close enough to touch. Keep writing my friend
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Date: 9/29/2023 8:55:00 PM
You are so encouraging!I go through times whenI want to break my pen and never write again. I do think-being honest is best. I am not here to be neither Popular nor a winner. It’s almost impossible to not be me. Genuine poets, soul centered are my readers,,, that means you! Smiles and hugs,Pangie xxx
Date: 9/29/2023 8:51:00 AM
Such a delicate Senryu. So peaceful and romantic. Blessings.
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:13:00 AM
Greetings from California, Victor. Always moved by the sincerity of your heart. Merci, Pangie xx
Date: 9/28/2023 2:29:00 PM
Very romantic. A joy to read.
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:10:00 AM
Yes, it is! In a subtle way. This poem is multi dimensional. Your attentiveness is appreciated. Pangie xx
Date: 9/27/2023 8:38:00 PM
Wow! Brilliant:)
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Date: 9/27/2023 9:11:00 PM
Sincere thanks, Joanna, I hope the moon s lees your dreams tonight!merci…. Pangie! Xx
Date: 9/27/2023 5:21:00 PM
Pangie, you've painted a pretty picture with your poem. Proves there's love everywhere.
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Date: 9/27/2023 9:07:00 PM
David, I think you don’t know, what a pleasure it is to hear from you, and not ignored! It really means a lot to me and I want to thank you for doing this. Yes there is love in the world and by the way, I liked the last line, heaven, and earth kiss! I never thought of that before. It’s even more romantic than thinking of a man and woman. ))) Pangie xx 9:06pm PST ))
Date: 9/27/2023 4:03:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 9/27/2023 4:32:00 PM
Dear Karen, What a beautiful comment and surprise to hear from you. You bring sunshine into my life and my soul.. Sincere thanks, Pangie xx

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