Moonlight On the Mountain

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At magic mountain of the purple twilight dusk, Summery stars swirl! A dusty purple evening, of redbird songs echoing. Magnificent moon, Pearls spill down the mountainside, No breeze is stirring. Golden memories now fade as tomorrow dreams invade.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/3/2022 7:59:00 PM

Two wonderful tankas, especially like the last line, and with it a positive outlook.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2022 8:22:00 PM

Thank you for the fine compliments, Harry. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/2/2022 1:11:00 AM

Graceful poem but I wish there was a breeze.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2022 11:45:00 AM

Lol! There always is one sooner or later. Thank you for the compliment. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2022 8:45:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this poetic picture you have related in words Evelyn. Twilight is my favorite time of day…both morning and evening. Blessings xxoo

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2022 9:43:00 PM

Twilight is indeed a wonderful time, Connie. I love the slower pace then, too. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/1/2022 7:39:00 PM

All invasions should be this welcome!! Dream on, my friend, and write on too! :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2022 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. Your words inspire and delight. :) Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/1/2022 7:31:00 PM

Pearls spill down the mountainside - love it, sweet one!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2022 7:47:00 PM

I appreciate your remarks very much, Kim. :)