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We tango on moonbeam's glow to the rhythm of a starry sky a fox-trot in indigo and off we float like butterflies Though our feet never leave the ground we waltz by Venus up above The rhythm of our hearts have found The melody of love ~ 6/27/17

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Date: 8/31/2017 9:32:00 PM
oh such lovely imagery, romance and poetic expression Joseph! I love this line, your last amazing line; 'The rhythm of our hearts have found the melody of love.' Spectacular romance for sure! Loved it :)
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Date: 7/2/2017 11:03:00 PM
I can just imagine the couple lost in the music and lyrics, dancing as if floating and oblivious to all else except themselves - A delightful, melodic piece Joseph. Thanks for sharing...Maria
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:04:00 AM
One smooth samba of a poem, Joseph. I agree w/Akkina ... fabulously penned. Love and peace always, my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Freddie
Date: 6/29/2017 9:13:00 PM
You are smooth on your feet as well as with your pen. Fabulously done :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 9:18:00 PM
Thank you Akkina
Date: 6/29/2017 12:31:00 AM
So abounding with love and energy, Joseph, well sung:)
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Date: 6/29/2017 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 6/28/2017 5:40:00 PM
joseph, you must be a good dancer to be able to make this poem glide!..awesome;huggs
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Date: 6/28/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Nette...I do alright on the dance floor..:-)
Date: 6/28/2017 11:25:00 AM
Love poems of dancing and I loved yours. fox trot in indigo. wow!
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Date: 6/28/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Ralph
Date: 6/27/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this gem.
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Date: 6/27/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi
Date: 6/27/2017 2:53:00 PM
so cute and playful!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/27/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 6/27/2017 11:24:00 AM
- Excellent, melody of love Joseph - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Anne
Date: 6/27/2017 9:10:00 AM
Sure is fun when that happens! Joseph this is exceptional work.
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 6/27/2017 9:10:00 AM
This would put stars in my eyes. Beautifully written, Joseph.
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:37:00 PM
Shall we dance?... Thank you Lin
Date: 6/27/2017 8:35:00 AM
I hope this dances to the top of the contest List Joseph, a delightful romantic tango:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Jan..I hope so too
Date: 6/27/2017 8:01:00 AM
This is perfect Joseph. I love it. Saved as a favorite :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/27/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi

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