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Moon: the Wizard

Moon: The Wizard Ocean is bewitched High Tides ___ bear wings in moonlight Fly towards the Moon 2. Winter Nights Chilling breeze blowing Awakening coloured leaves To roam in snow trunks ??_______________________?? 30th July, 2022 5,7,5 5,7,5 Paghunda Zahid

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/7/2022 10:00:00 AM

This so cleverly created and thought out, you are a whiz kid! We had a show on TV every week, quite some years ago, and the most intelligent of the class - different age groups weekly-formed a panel and also the people answering were from different schools, but all the same age for each separate programme. It was called the Whiz Kids, you surely would have been chosen! HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2022 3:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. Way to go. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 8/6/2022 1:33:00 PM

The imagery in both is outstanding making them fine Haikus my friend. Bill

Len Gasun

Date: 8/5/2022 7:31:00 AM

Beautiful poem with fascinating imagery. High tides- bear wings in moonlight. Wow! I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing my dear friend. God bless. Hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/4/2022 2:34:00 PM

Well done, and beautiful. I really liked these! Panagiota XXX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2022 4:51:00 PM

bear wings in moonlight. that is so pretty

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/3/2022 9:32:00 AM

Both of these are excellent with impressive imagery Paghunda. Blessings xxoo

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/31/2022 7:37:00 PM

There is something about ocean that is most magical, at night while the crescent moon is above. It can make you feel like it's watching over you. Enjoyed Pajhunda, hugs

Valsa George

Date: 7/31/2022 9:09:00 AM

Two beautiful haikus ! Enjoyed, dear Paghunda...

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/30/2022 10:14:00 PM

love the bewitching, and the awakening leaves, two very good haikus.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/30/2022 11:54:00 AM

Lovely! The moon bewitches and engages her domain with flights of fancy. Fine Haikus, Robert