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Moon Stars Lake

Moon casting shadows as it shines down through the trees forming eerie shapes Exploding stars shoot across the sky leaving trails glittering behind Still mysterious the lake gleaming in moonlight silver in beauty

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/9/2015 12:18:00 PM

Does the Moon cast shadows? If you say so, I like it. Congrats, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2013 10:47:00 AM

I could just see the scene from your descriptive work..Great expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/30/2013 12:32:00 AM

Shadow it is so lovely ....Seren

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/30/2013 2:57:00 PM

Seren dear friend Ty and for your prayers too Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2013 8:54:00 AM

Shadow, your poem is beautiful.... Linda

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2013 1:46:00 PM

Ty Linda so pleased you like it Shadow x smiles

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/29/2013 8:09:00 AM

Riveting & beautiful. I adored the hell out of this. I love a moonlit lake. Wonderful job!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2013 1:49:00 PM

Ty Drake its the simple things that give so much joy Shadow x smiles

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/29/2013 8:03:00 AM

VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE LINDA HAVE A BLESSED BEAUTIFUL DAY

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2013 1:50:00 PM

Liam Ty kindly you too have a great day Shadow x smiles

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/29/2013 7:14:00 AM

Such a descriptive write my dear Shadow! Felt the quiet passion... big hugs, Jack xoxox

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2013 1:54:00 PM

ty Jack nature is marvelous Shadow x smiles

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/29/2013 5:25:00 AM

Wow, what beauty this write shines my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! I especially loved the last line of the last stanza, "silver in beauty" that says a lot in itself right there, such descriptions! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2013 5:54:00 AM

Russell Ty so kindly I enjoyed visiting your most enlightening works today if I can ever be half the poet you are I will be happy ty for your time Shadow x smile