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wide eyed in the midst of a sleepless night she lay entranced as moon shadows languorously danced against the lonely barren walls of her bedroom AP: 2nd place 2020, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 24, 2018 to CONTEST NO.140 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 12/10/2018 12:02:00 AM
Great GREAT poem!
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Date: 12/2/2018 7:47:00 PM
Line, nicely done, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2018 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.
Date: 11/24/2018 9:30:00 PM
Very effective and evocative use of imagery... I could clearly see those moon shadows dancing on the walls as I read this! Lovely!! ;)
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Date: 11/24/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 11/24/2018 7:26:00 PM
really like this short expression of the image you saw.
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Date: 11/24/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 11/24/2018 6:45:00 PM
I really enjoyed the images - but would love to read a much longer one.
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Date: 11/24/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jon. I take that as a wonderful compliment.
Date: 11/24/2018 5:27:00 PM
This is lovely Line. :)
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Date: 11/24/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Gray. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/24/2018 5:25:00 PM
Beautifully written, l have experienced this many times.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2018 8:56:00 PM
Long sleepless nights. Thanks for your visit and comment, Wren.
Date: 11/24/2018 4:23:00 PM
Wow, you really do paint a poem, Line..awesome, love it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/24/2018 4:10:00 PM
I can picture it. You have written this beautifully Line :)
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Date: 11/24/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.

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