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Moon Dog

Many moons ago there was a fellow so handsome that he made the ladies swoon. No woman ever challenged him because they all believed that fellow hung the moon. Once in a blue moon he met a woman who would not give that guy the time of day. He wanted her and promised her the moon. She turned her back; she was a moon away! “You’re reaching for the moon,” the woman said, “by going after me. You’d have to be a five-foot-two with luscious eyes of blue! Cry for the moon. Men don’t interest me!” June 12, 2018 for Kevin Shaw's Moon Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/22/2018 8:40:00 AM
Wow, that was a fun read. What a blue twist!
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Date: 6/17/2018 12:54:00 PM
what a fun poem Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2018 1:44:00 PM
Hello Andrea, good for this woman. Not all women are interested in good looking men. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/14/2018 9:59:00 AM
Enjoyed your humorous write, Andrea, at least she didn't turn her back and "moon" him... All the best. John
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Date: 6/13/2018 6:16:00 PM
LOL She likes them short at 5-foot-two. Got a good laugh from this, my friend. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2018 3:12:00 PM
lol..Nicely done Andrea..best wishes
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Date: 6/13/2018 11:23:00 AM
Very clever...
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Date: 6/13/2018 10:56:00 AM
Lunar Moon, a crazy poem, which i love to bits, 5 foot 2 eyes of blue. I wonder?
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Date: 6/13/2018 9:44:00 AM
Giggles! Enjoyed :) good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your fun story..well articulated..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/13/2018 12:21:00 AM
Well written Andrea, wow you done that at warp speed lol, took me a few days.
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