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Moon Ziket

A full moon shines brightly aliens-cheese Date Written: 8/12/2020 howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 8/16/2020 3:28:00 PM
Yours is a lovely and witty poem, Paula. Truly enjoyed. Warm regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/20/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and for your kind words. Enjoy your day writing away........
Date: 8/16/2020 4:03:00 AM
Tonight i dreamed i saw an UFO... i think now that could be an allien-cheese... salute alkas
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Watch out for that alien-cheese. Enjoy your day writing away........
Date: 8/14/2020 10:54:00 AM
The moon does look like Swiss cheese with its craters. Love the implication in your poem, Paula! Too many people have seen UFOs for there not to be some out there. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your best wishes. It is good to hear from you. Your are right, "Too many people have seen UFOs for there not to be some out there." Wish they would tell us what they know. Enjoy your day with a hug...............
Date: 8/13/2020 4:32:00 PM
Loved M.L's comment. fun "piece" makes me think of piece of cheese
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for your 2 notes. Yes, cheese a huge ball. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...........................
Date: 8/13/2020 4:31:00 PM
this is just delightful!
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Date: 8/13/2020 4:22:00 PM
Oh I love this, what a fun piece!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2020 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day................
Date: 8/13/2020 5:26:00 AM
fun poem Paula:-) hugs jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/13/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day with a hug..................

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