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MONSTER

Some just can't understand. And they never will. They've never been trapped in the infernal abyss. But I've been there. I've languished in the pit, felt the darkness seep through every pore of my flesh, been denied the light. Depression plays tricks with your mind, makes you believe things that are untrue, blurs the lines between fantasy and reality. I have suffered abandonment by those I loved most, those whose job it was to have my back, to support me when I was descending. It must be you, Depression says. You are the problem. You are diseased, defective, a human disaster. Why not just off yourself? So many ways. A tree limb. A jump. The open sea. A knife, a gun, your life, I've won! But a win for Depression is a loss for me. Depression is a monster in my head, and monsters are never our friends. So I take up my sword, tell myself I have some good things in my life, that I am loved, even if by only a few, or just one. But the sword feels too heavy and my hands are sweaty. A thrust here, a swing there and it's on the ground. The monster laughs. Its disgusting saliva is all over me. The stench of its breath is more than I can bear. So I say to myself, give in. The fight is too much. I'm too weak to slay this beast. But at my moment of surrender an angel appears at my side, picks up the sword and removes the head of the monster from its torso. It seems so surreal, things are moving in slow motion. I wonder if I am dreaming or seeing a vision. But then the beast slumps over dead at my feet. It is over, for now. The angel smiles, then disappears before my eyes. The lesson becomes clear to me, like a ray of sun forcing its way through the clouds. On my own I could never claim victory over the beast. But with a little help, I won. We won. And for that I am and will always be forever grateful. For I know that if/when another monster should appear, I am not alone. I suppose I never really was.

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Date: 6/6/2025 10:48:00 PM
Thankyou for sharing. Depression is a monster. Very deep .Good write Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/7/2025 5:39:00 AM
Yes ma'am you're welcome
Date: 5/18/2025 10:12:00 AM
I did not know, the monster had you under its spell at a time, you are such a delightful person, poet. Always visiting with smiles it seems, and much appreciated. One can only give so much of their advice, but I think you already know one answer, and that is poetry..please write more like this narrative so deep and hopeful. Love is good, even if its only one person your new family. Take care of you, TW!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/18/2025 4:38:00 PM
Yeah I had a few rough months earlier this year so I wrote this, though I don't think I've ever suffered from clinical depression. You're sweet. Thx
Date: 5/14/2025 8:48:00 PM
Just stumbled on this today. Depression is a medical condition needing prescribed medicines. If combined with meditation* (*simply resting in thought rested stillness without effort) and when thoughts arise, distancing our core essence from the thoughts by observing thoughts in nonchalance as external abstract objects, in time the patterns ebb, since we feed them not.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2025 5:58:00 AM
Appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 4/20/2025 12:28:00 PM
This poem is not only a brave and honest portrayal of a personal battle, but it also offers a message of hope and the importance of support. You've made the reader feel the weight of this experience, but ultimately, the arrival of the angel and the final understanding provide a sense of comfort and connection. Thank you for sharing such a vulnerable and ultimately hopeful piece. You've done a wonderful job.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/20/2025 12:42:00 PM
Thx Joel and yours was quite worthy as well
Date: 4/2/2025 3:11:00 AM
Depression is a dark and lonely existence in ones own mind. Writing is therapeutic and healing and brings awareness. Thankyou for sharing and please know there is always an angel to help you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/2/2025 5:21:00 AM
Very kind. Thank you
Date: 3/18/2025 3:03:00 PM
Thank you I enjoy all your poems on your page.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/1/2025 1:29:00 PM
Thx muchly Sheen-ster
Date: 3/16/2025 7:34:00 AM
Ah Haa.! Cut..Hack..Slash-- Stab slice chop.' And chop some more' and A gahh.' Be perturbed You demonic hordes!! Don't you worry Tom I'm Well worth every gahh.' There ever was.' Lol)) My I feel a bit dizzy.' That was quite some hacking to get through." And its all legal as i Am a co-worker in the kingdom so you can milk The situation for all your worth.' Lol)) until next Time demons.' I shall return stronger if needed.' I hope you feel better by the way Tom.? As a smile Is a good weapon too
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/16/2025 6:17:00 PM
Much better and thx for picking up your sword
Date: 3/14/2025 10:19:00 PM
Such a strong poem, Tom, that resonates with many. Depression can be so debilitating. For me, depression comes as a dark cloak when my memory dwells on dear, valued folks in my life now gone - some way too soon due to addiction. Fortunately I have a cabin deep in the Canadian Shield. No hydro, just wood stoves for heat; nature lifts me. As a caregiver too, I feel I must push on. A fine posting. Thoughtful. Be well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/15/2025 5:35:00 AM
Nature is definitely one of the helps available, especially if one can embrace the love of a Creator behind such beauty. Thx for comment
Date: 3/13/2025 5:16:00 PM
Tom, interesting story that brings us into the mind of a depressed soul. As you point out, with some help we can overcome the demon. It's remarkable that the chemical state of our mind gets affected by our day to day experiences and suffering. We are lucky who can navigate to a place where we can exercise our strengths and find work we enjoy. A satisfying family life plays a big part in all this. I believe that taking responsibility and forgiving can lead to a super high and slay the monster. However, it takes a lot of thought and perseverance. We do have the opportunity to change how we relate to our memories, and although they are always there, they can serve as lessons for how we deal with the present. That's my brief philosophy of life. Smiles!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/14/2025 5:54:00 AM
I don't think depression is clearly understood even in this twenty first century. The human brain is so incredibly complex. But yes, those who suffer need all the help they can get
Date: 3/13/2025 4:14:00 AM
Despite having worked as a mental health nurse for much of my working life I have never considered myself an ‘expert’ re depression. The experts are those who have it. Pre Covid 1 in 20 people worldwide suffered with various levels of depression; it knows no boundaries. You describe it and the battle with it through metaphor so vividly and well here. Depression is invisible to the general public. It’s as if a double edged sword is needed. Medication & talking therapies are key. Great write. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/15/2025 5:38:00 AM
Not at all. Depression has many sources and is quite complex, as I mentioned to Duke. I wouldn't pretend to fully understand the mechanisms involved
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/13/2025 7:08:00 AM
Agreed Tom. Just reading through what I wrote originally: "The experts are those who have it" I think, needs some clarification. I'm referring to those people's valued experiences and insights and hope it didn't come across as flippant. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/13/2025 6:10:00 AM
Appreciate your educated input Gary. Pity the teens going through it without the skills yet to cope
Date: 3/12/2025 7:47:00 PM
Your words are so honest, raw. I am glad the speaker won the battle. Never alone! Your light shines through but it seems you are unafraid to navigate through the darkness, and face the monsters head-on. Always, Laura
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/13/2025 6:08:00 AM
Monsters are enemies. Formidable, but defeatable. Thx for visit
Date: 3/12/2025 7:08:00 PM
I am you, you are me and we need be the happiest sad people we can because life is short. I have many poems about 'lethargy' because that's what sadness does to me. Your poem form is 'free verse', just as your personality is a free verse that u can ink anyway we wish thru God - not easy. Sometimes I feel sure I've yet to fully absorb all I'm sad about. Keep writing, sometimes you'll explain yourself to yourself thru your words, it is therapy. Despite appearances, all is in divine order ...CayCay
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/13/2025 6:08:00 AM
A free verse personality? Why not. Thx so much for your input and rushing you many bright, sunny days
Date: 3/12/2025 12:40:00 AM
With a little help from God, friends and healthy tools I too overcame this monster Tom! This is a raw important write that I hope was therapeutic to pen. Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/12/2025 5:36:00 AM
I'm glad you got the help you needed dear Karen
Date: 3/11/2025 1:50:00 AM
Depression is a silent battle but signs of warfare are visible to all those who care enough to look deeper. You may think that such people are few and far from reach but they could be closer than you think, just as illustrated in this heart-wrenching piece. Everyone deserves such a person. You never walk alone.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/11/2025 6:09:00 AM
Thx Hiba. Pity those who are truly alone in their struggles
Date: 3/10/2025 8:30:00 AM
Dear Tom, I was married to a man with bipolar, so I've seen depression from this side. Of things I have wrong, I don't have depression, and for this, I am eternally grateful. Take good care of yourself and know you have worth...Ann
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2025 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Ann and I have a relative who suffers, though meds help a good bit
Date: 3/10/2025 7:12:00 AM
Moving and true. Thanks for sharing. Being a Christian doesn’t mean one is exempt from feeling the effects of depression. The monster tries to make us believe the lie that we are not worthy and that ultimately we are on our own. As portrayed in your story, that could not be further from the truth. Reach out to God and others for help. Do not suffer in silence.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2025 7:17:00 AM
So true Rick. We're all human and subject to the ravages of sin and imperfection, in all its various facets. As for me, the "drawing close to God is good for me" - Psalm 73:28
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2025 7:15:00 AM
Christians feel it is a spiritual failing to be dealing with mental health issues. Sometimes other Christians shame them for being weak in their faith. That makes people pretend instead of dealing with their emotions.
Date: 3/10/2025 5:55:00 AM
I remember when I was falling into that abyss, I was thinking of my cousin and her mom (my aunt) who passed away, and I was praying. My daughter had no idea of what I was going through, never…like 99.9 percent, post pics. She sent me a pic of one of them, the other posted on FB! Those angels are tangible. Slay the monster!! Hugs…great work!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/10/2025 6:58:00 AM
I'm glad you got your boost Kim!
Date: 3/9/2025 1:57:00 PM
This is great description and metaphor. I never struggle with this monster although I am surprised I don't because my physical trials make me feel awful. My husband dealt with this most of his life. In his case, meds were the answer. I think everyone is so different.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2025 3:30:00 PM
Muchos gracias
Date: 3/9/2025 10:09:00 AM
I thank God my depressions are mostly short-lived. They are the result of treatment of cancer. Hormone therapy makes me nervous. I deleted my poetry site twice. I had an urge lately to delete my site a third time. But this time I'm stronger.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2025 11:06:00 AM
Awww thx Mark. Some might see my reappearance as a bad omen of things to come. Buwahahaha
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Mark Massey
Date: 3/9/2025 10:50:00 AM
Tom, you are like a comet - burning brightly everytime you pass through…then gone - only to reappear again, and again, and again - each time as positive and as bright as ever.
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Mark Massey
Date: 3/9/2025 10:44:00 AM
Victor, I have done the same twice as well. I believe it was during bouts of depression. I then realized that when I deleted my site, so went all my comments to others and any trophies awarded to others from PS contests I hosted. I failed to realize the negative impact I may have had on fellow members… though totally unintended. I hope your health is improving… we so often fail to understand that we are all human and all share similar burdens. Thank you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2025 10:19:00 AM
I can empathize Victor. Despite the rumors to the contrary I have always left here of my own volition. Sometimes I get tired of social media. Sometimes I grow weary of the ankle biters. But there are so many supportive, decent people here. Hang in there good buddy
Date: 3/9/2025 9:14:00 AM
Tom, this story is incredibly moving. The way you describe the battle with depression and finding hope through support is perfect. It’s a positive reminder that even in our darkest moments, we’re never really alone. Well done..
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2025 9:31:00 AM
Much thx Mark. Any time you visit and comment I know it's real
Date: 3/9/2025 7:47:00 AM
Dear Tom I had gone through same experiences when I was put in tight corners seeing no outlets to overcome, always an angel appeared unexpectedly to rescue me to overcome the problem. At last I was saved. Now I know, I am not alone, but always I’m guarded . Have Good Days.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2025 9:30:00 AM
At times our angels are fellow humans, other times divine intervention is the only explanation. Thx
Date: 3/8/2025 2:50:00 AM
oh Tom, this made me cry but l cant actually shed tears with my illness, it stops my tear ducts working :( but in my heart your words touched every nerve of me as iv suffered really bad depression over the years. The hardest is when someone asks how l am, & if l say i'm struggling, they look aghast !! l had one person say & looked mockingly they dont know what i'm talking about as they have never experienced depression that l described to her. It is a monster, but we dont fight it alone.x
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2025 5:53:00 AM
No we don't! As for the naysayers and ankle biters, best ignored
Date: 3/7/2025 5:39:00 AM
Yes, depression is horrible. There are some good medicines, but sometimes they just don't fix the problem. So many people suffer from it in our world. Not many understand or can't understand because they haven't been down that road and they should be so thankful that they have not suffered from it. Good of you to share this with us. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/7/2025 5:47:00 AM
Faith is the best medicine of all. Thx Sara
Date: 3/6/2025 3:40:00 PM
Tom you share a condition that so many in this world are experiencing. Your words convey an illness that can cause even suicide. I believe that Americans are overly medicated and these medications have a detrimental affect on those taking these cerebral drugs. Of course there are other factors that contribute to depression. We should reach out to those that we know have a history of this decease and have dialogue with them and try and uplift their spirits. I wish there was a concrete solution.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/6/2025 3:51:00 PM
I believe there are many "helps" available including meds, but the only real solution is the kingdom of God. Thx Michael
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Michael Tor
Date: 3/6/2025 3:41:00 PM
thanks for sharing Tom, great awareness you provided for the reader... Have a nice day my friend...
Date: 3/6/2025 12:24:00 PM
Hi Tom, depression is a terrible illness far worse for those who live alone, hope your keeping well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/6/2025 12:40:00 PM
I know. Your poem tells me you're coping though. Thx for visit
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