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Monoku

gnarled limbs inside a full moon - frost bit 6-20-20 ~Fourth Place Premier Contest~ Best Monoku You Wrote Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke For Monoku Contest sponsored by Silent One July 9, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2020 3:03:00 PM

from an earlier comment I made below I c an see how wowed I was by this first time I ever saw it. It remains one of your very best.Congrats, Connie.

V. Deepa

Date: 6/23/2020 6:50:00 AM

Hello mam, Beautiful monoku.:-) Congratulations on your win.Keep writing .keep inspiring:-).Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/23/2020 9:10:00 PM

Thank you very much V. Monoku is very much like haiku. I like both forms. Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2020 7:03:00 PM

SO good to see this gem again, many congrats Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 10:54:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I have been reading emails and poetry all day and I am still not caught up. Have a great day. xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2020 4:02:00 PM

These one liners speak volumes, just reading the winners list, some brilliant entries, this one included. Congrats on your win Connie. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Haiku reduced....hope you enjoyed Father's Day. xxoo

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 2:24:00 PM

Really gorgeous words Connie. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thank you my dear poet. I appreciate this comment. Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/22/2020 1:11:00 PM

Lovely, WINNING monoku, Connie! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/22/2020 3:19:00 PM

Thank you Janice. I loved your entry. xxoo

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/23/2016 4:32:00 AM

Congrats Connie, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/23/2016 7:05:00 AM

Thank you Teddy. I appreciate that. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 3:49:00 PM

OMG. Too bad this had not been my contest. For sure in top three!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/19/2016 6:00:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. It won first place in Debbie's contest so I am fine with number nine. Cheers, Connie ; )

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2016 6:25:00 PM

would love to have seen this place much higher Connie:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/19/2016 1:56:00 AM

Thats okay Jan...Debbie Guzzi gave it first place in her contest, and it was the only first place, so I am fine with number 9. Cheers : )

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 5:22:00 PM

CONNIE, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/19/2016 1:59:00 AM

You too Skat. His list is a pretty long one! : )

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 5/31/2013 9:18:00 PM

Well done monoky, Connie, lovely imagery.

Kash Poet

Date: 10/25/2012 8:17:00 PM

Ohh..love this Connie.Soupmail.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2012 3:11:00 PM

Ahhh! So creative and expressive..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/15/2012 5:41:00 PM

wonderful Monoku Connie. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/11/2012 6:51:00 AM

wow a winner, and deservingly so, many aspects come to mind after reading this...

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/9/2012 3:47:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place win, very good monoku, striking and atmospheric...thanks for your kind comment on my tanka :-)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/8/2012 1:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Well done. love phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2012 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Singled Out" contest Connie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/8/2012 7:32:00 AM

Congrats Connie..pretty piece. BG

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/8/2012 7:03:00 AM

Powerful image here! What lamguage is it mahalo from? What does it mean? Peace and love Matthew Anish

Ralph Mason

Date: 10/7/2012 8:42:00 PM

lovely Monoku Connie. Congratulations on your win. warm thoughts, Ralph

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:30:00 PM

so glad to see this beauty was a winner - Congrats on your wins : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2012 9:27:00 AM

Connie, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debbie's "Singled Out" awesome contest. Enjoy your day, always~ PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2012 8:43:00 AM

an imagery to behold, connie.. my best clappies for your well-deserved award!..:)huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2012 10:50:00 PM

WOWOWOW, Connie, you really knocked my socks off with this one. Never saw you do such a thing with one line! Well deserved win, my very good friend. Luv, Andrea