Monoku -As Is

as transient as foam - images come, then go

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Elaine George

Date: 7/12/2008 7:28:00 AM

Hi Brian, I continue to learn from you. It is so nice to be back here at the soup. I have been experiencing a dry spell since the attack on the soup. I need inspiration like these wonderful examples and contests that fuel my poetic heart. Thank you. Lainie

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2008 3:03:00 PM

a very good poem, well penned and so true.

Charles Fuller

Date: 7/7/2008 8:28:00 AM

And it is the master poet in you that captures those moments before they fade, and paint them for all to see. Well done. My best, Charlie

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/6/2008 10:30:00 AM

So much said Brian - i reckon all of us can relate

P Sheart

Date: 7/6/2008 8:08:00 AM

Outstanding Brian We all can relate to this one! Thanks for your welcome comments on my latest and for infor. I never heard of Abba,struck me as funny I thought I've heard of most everyone. Learn something new everyday. Very interesting how a musical was made from their lyrics/songs...Gives hope ha! Later Love Light Truth Patricia

Marycile Beer

Date: 7/5/2008 6:26:00 PM

Perfectly said, Brian. Good one. God Bless, Cile

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/5/2008 4:00:00 PM

Know the feeling and you have captured it well. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/5/2008 8:06:00 AM

Yes! There have been so many I have lost for they disappear from memory too quickly! Excellent. Love, Shar