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Monoku-Spin

almost invisible - sin cloaked in desire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 6:00:00 PM
I know I must not do something because it's wrong, but I find excuses to justify it. You phrased it perfectly.
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Date: 8/1/2009 8:04:00 AM
Love it i must agree with the other comments.
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Date: 7/31/2009 9:40:00 AM
i like it(really)like it
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:02:00 AM
Love this Monoku. You've got it right. There was a song years ago that said something like this "Lord, it's the devil just look at him he's got blue eyes and blue jeans". Keep writing. Sara
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