Monoku-Say Again ?

so many senior moments- lost in the stutter of forgetfulness

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Sharon Winter

Date: 12/15/2009 11:27:00 AM

Oh yes, perfect, looking for something I could relate to so well indeed. : )) Hello dear Brian, it is so lovely to read you as always. Thank you so kindly for still remembering me in your congrats and good wishes both on feature poem and in Debbie's contest. Happy Christmas to you and yours, may the spirit of the season be with you all year through. Keep up the great writing, and art too! You are a constant inspiration to all. love & hugs, shar xoxo

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2009 11:52:00 PM

I am becoming more and more - now what was it I was going to say? Oh! yes! I totally understand this Monoku. Good one, Brian. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 4:38:00 AM

So sad that they are too.. much said in two lines of monoku... thankxxx for sharing and for your ever encouraging comments on my writings... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/2/2009 3:21:00 AM

Brian, This monoku is so true. I say that because the tho___, tho___, tho___, ... Oh, I forgot. (LOL, I'm just kidding, being silly, and playing with reality a little bit.) Thank you for your comments. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2009 4:06:00 PM

Just when we get mature enough to be better in so many ways this happens. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/1/2009 2:04:00 PM

Oh, I can so identify with this one! Great monoku! ~Juliane

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/1/2009 9:16:00 AM

Brian this is priceless. You got me laughing this morning. Just told Catie I was going for a coffee and forgetfulness crept in. Going right now before I forget again. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl