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One little sidestep off the beaten track, Is a colorful garden of dazzling shades, With blood red geraniums of scintillating hue Interspersed by those of white and baby pink, Where beauty sings mysteriously, Reigning in every theme, a place of bliss Where silence speaks for itself, Where bees are the only intruders, I suppose. A place to feast the eyes and relax, Reminding one of the Garden of Eden! At its center is someone, in blossoming beauty. Not sure if she is sitting on the edge of a boulder, Or simply crouching on the carpet of grass, Or is it a statue set up amid the array of flowers? An angelic form so intent on what she does, Lost to the world, her face bent, But eyes moving up and down, In tandem with the sewing needle in hand. Is she stitching a frock for her little girl, Sitting close to her mother’s feet? A starlet fallen from the night sky, Or a cherubim dropped down from heaven’s height, In flowing azure blue frock with golden hair. She too, like her mother, is so absorbed, Pouring her soul in to the open book in her lap. May be a ploy employed by the mother, Not to disturb her in her work. Oh, vagrant winds, come not close, To disturb the tranquility of the two Wholly sinking into what they are doing. Kindly veer in another direction And don’t interrupt their solitude! April.22. 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere . No1210 Poetry Contest This is based on Claude Monet's famous painting- Madame- Monet-and-child, where he has pictured his wife Camille and child in his garden.

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Date: 4/26/2023 7:51:00 PM
My first 'impression' of this one. (Never saw it before). Nicely done, Valsa!
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:12:00 PM
Wonderful description, Valsa, of a beautiful painting:)
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Date: 4/23/2023 11:58:00 AM
Wow! Valsa, Your muse caused you to write such a well-written poem based on the renowned painting. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:38:00 AM
A lovely write/picture. Love Both. Good Luck. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 4/23/2023 8:09:00 AM
I never saw this painting before, but you sure do portray it well . Beautiful.
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Date: 4/23/2023 2:05:00 AM
I am sure Brian will enjoy this one. A beautiful painting for sure. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I enjoy the colors he used. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/22/2023 8:23:00 PM
This is so angelic and innocent, just like the painting, so full of the imagery of his love for them~
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Date: 4/22/2023 10:01:00 AM
Great description, Valsa. Sadly Camile, the woman and his wife, died a year later from tuberculosis. A very good read:)
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:18:00 AM
She did die young, but not the following year. It looks like it was 4 years later, still very sad. The child is his son, whom grew up but Claude outlived.
Date: 4/22/2023 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful scenery with poem and picture, what a blessing to read today : ). Love the simple treasures of motherly bonding portrayed, peaceful, serenity,love and joy,
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Date: 4/22/2023 5:41:00 AM
You paint a painting with your words, Valsa. Wonderfully descriptive of the renowned artist's treasured work. Best to you my friend.
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Date: 4/22/2023 4:09:00 AM
You have not lost your knack for description and painting such wonderful colors.
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Valsa George
Date: 4/22/2023 4:21:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor for your encouraging comment. It was with great apprehension that I posted it.... my maiden attempt.
Date: 4/22/2023 2:51:00 AM
I felt all the beauty of the moment that would have easily passed me by. I particularly like "A starlet fallen from the night sky" and "Oh, vagrant winds, come not close, To disturb the tranquility of the two Wholly sinking into what they are doing". You have perfectly captured the beauty of sitting in quiet companionship - just beautiful! I think this looks like a high placer (I've had N/As for many of my ekphrasis as it happens, so nice to know my recent placed one acted as inspiration)
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Valsa George
Date: 4/22/2023 4:17:00 AM
Thank you once again for your uplifting comment. I feel this form is challenging and you are so good at trapping Melancholy and the other subtle and fleeting emotions of the mind. I must read more of your ekphrasis poems
Date: 4/22/2023 2:29:00 AM
This is beautiful Valsa! Really well done <3
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Valsa George
Date: 4/22/2023 2:40:00 AM
This is my first attempt at Ekphrasis, inspired by your trophy win Ekphrasis. I know how difficult it is, can come nowhere near you. Still a vain whim. Thank you for the encouragement.

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