Mom's Bread

Ruddy, handsome
sunlit eyes
cropping gold
into bundles
carted up mountain
echoing songs
of farmers thrashing.
Seeds of strength
stoned into flour
rounded into loaves
balanced on boards
carried up 
the stony hill climb
on women’s heads
crowned with  twisted
circled rags.
Walls and benches
blackened by heat
dusted with ashes
shaken off the oven bed
by a spec of a woman
in black
forking hay into flames
eye timing loaves 
to perfection.
Aroma of singular 
ecstatic delicacy
and chit-chat of women
waiting for their tanned loaves
as mothers for their toddler
at the end of a sunny
school day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Moore Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 9:44 PM
Didn't have mountains where I was raised, but we had bread! Nothing like the aroma of bread cooking in the over. Thanks for the memories.
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 5:17 PM
wow, bread the old fashioned way. This is REALLY nicely crafted, Frances! My maiden name is Miller, so I wonder if Millers in my ancestry were doing this kind of thing.
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Such cozy details..the aroma flows through your words ..and feels like genuine love feeding the family. Great write, Frances.
Cozart Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 1:02 PM
This is awesome, Frances. Really solid imagery. Nice write.
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