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MOMMY OF WHAT ARE WE MADE INSIDE US Well my dear Ruth We are made up of protons, And Neutrons, And of course Atoms, And Molecules. But isn’t this conversation A little premature For you’re Far too young, But let me continue, We have bones, And tendons And of course muscles, Blood and fat, But mostly water. THEN MOMMY PLEASE GIVE A QUARTER I want to go to a fortune teller For she will tell me if we are nigh To die! All my friends talk about The pandemic and protests, riots and People dying. At school, I’m tired of looking a fool Even a boy in grade one Was told by his mom That when we die We disintegrate Into a small pile on the floor Of beautiful colored crystals, How silly of this boy’ mom That is not true, only in Science fiction films! BUT MOMMY YOU TOLD ME WE ALL GO TO HEAVEN IS THAT RIGHT? Yes oh yes my dear, Remember that God is near. But many in this world are bad, So terribly sad! I’M NOT SCARED MOMMY And so it should be, You are a brave little girl So if anyone says we are going to die Console them don’t let them cry The world is a mess, Tell them God I am ready yes. You are a clever child And all the wonderful Thoughts in your mind And your awesome soul And your faith, makes you whole God always remembers And never forgets, He has angels for secretaries So every human thought is banked And then stamped For passing the pearly gates to heaven But you are only seven, You have a long life ahead You have nothing to dread! But MOMMY WE ARE SO MANY HOW DOES GOD REMEMBER He is ever present sweetheart and is everywhere He knows where you are and what You are thinking Your passport will be stamped, Remember the angels have all of this banked. Some won’t get through But certainly you! One day when you are old, forget what that Silly boy said, God will call your name And you will zoom up to heaven Because your spirit and soul, Will have reached it's ultimate goal. We don’t need guns and knives, Our hearts, love and faith are our weapon To reach heaven, We will then be altogether, All of us celestial beings, our shackles and Earthly worries and tackles We will shed, This is for real, no pretend . Someone might drop a bomb and disintegrate The world, MOMMY WILL IT HURT, No my little Ruth, It will then just be a wonderful journey To a place of peace, Where earthly worries, cease. THANK-YOU MOMMY, NOW I UNDERSTAND

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Date: 8/7/2020 7:17:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, it is always the write thing to tell children the truth, the kingdom of heaven is a truth I have ever been sure of in my own soul. From the start to the finish, I love the content of this write. I am just a big kid at heart. Such a wonderful write my friend. This piece goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 7/18/2020 12:05:00 PM
Nice write...a soothing one for a child...I wouldn't know what to say if a young one of 7 asked me that question...Well done
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Date: 7/31/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thank-you Arturo, Children all the while ask why or what, they go their their formative years, really important until they are 8 but you have the faith and the spirit to talk to any 7 or 8 year old my friend. Take care, be safe, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/16/2020 10:16:00 AM
What we can't stand is thinking our loved ones have no hope. Please God let them all understand. Be blessed! Great poem!
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Date: 7/31/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hi Kim, Thank-you for a heartfelt comment, really beautiful, be blessed also my friend. Hugs and love, Jenny.
Date: 7/8/2020 6:02:00 PM
I love this. Going into my faves. It's so important to make sure our little ones know the truth and that it is so ingrained into them that nothing can shake it loose. That is our job as parents and if we don't at least try then we have failed. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/9/2020 10:31:00 AM
That is a wonderful compliment, thank-you Judy, yes our babies remain babies for Moms till they are quite a lot older and we are always there to advise them. Blessings my friend, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/8/2020 11:06:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed. What a lovely Mom! God bless you all!
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Date: 7/9/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thank-you Lure a terrific comment for all Mom's - take care and be safe, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/29/2020 1:13:00 PM
children look to us for the answers... even when we fear we hide it to ease their mind... love how you composed this one Jennifer... great advice great penning... hugs and blessings :)
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Date: 7/3/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Sandy, we all love our children, they are the best part of us. We try to not show fear to them so as not to alarm them because of our unquestionable love for them, Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.
Date: 6/27/2020 12:00:00 PM
Kids ask the most amazing questions and sometimes it even makes us think. Just a wonderful write.
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Date: 7/3/2020 10:14:00 AM
Thank-you MLK - so glad you enjoyed my poem - children do ask phenomenal questions and keeping asking why ? Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 6/24/2020 1:38:00 PM
What a beautifully sweet conversation between mummy and daughter! It is not easy to put children's minds at rest, but you have managed it extremely well, Jenny! ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:56:00 AM
Hi Paul - I don't have a daughter but have two wonderful sons to whom I said much the same when they were younger - thank you for a lovely comment. Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 6/23/2020 4:05:00 PM
Love this Jennifer. 's so very important to tell our little ones the truth.\ And to do it in such a way that they understand and will have no un-needed fear. Great stuff here. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:51:00 AM
I'm proud that you are putting it into your faves my friend.and I simply love your comment, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 6/23/2020 6:46:00 AM
This is so beautifully done, and is a faith message for all of us, even the ones who have not called their mother "mommy" for a long time. Well done my friend.
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:47:00 AM
Caren a very sweet comment, a comment from a mom who also loves her children very much. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 6/21/2020 10:10:00 AM
Love your poem, Jennifer. Children our innocent ones, have to tell us the true meaning of life in their world because they only know what God gave them, than us as their models to help them out to learn what their future brings. But, then you have parents that shouldn't be modeling to theirs because they teach them of bigotries and meanness.
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:45:00 AM
I also talk of those parents below that don't deserve children - we are there for ours, that is what matters, glad you enjoyed my poem Eve. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 6/21/2020 3:04:00 AM
Very uplifting, dear Jennifer. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:42:00 AM
Thank-you Elaine, I love you poetry by the way. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/20/2020 11:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, Jennifer. Children are so inquisitive and wise. They are often far more in touch with their spirituality than adults. You have reassured your daughter and have given her guidance, but her faith in God is already there...a beautiful thing to read. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:38:00 AM
What a warm comment Rhonda - I appreciated it so much - I have no daughter actually - we have two sons, but I said very much the same to them also. Keep safe. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/20/2020 2:29:00 PM
This poem is a unique perspective into you, Jennifer Mou. A delightful and incitefully penned verse. Hugs, Panagiota xx Thought of you last night when I ordered Grecian Gardenia products from Korres in Athens! M-m-m-')))
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:34:00 AM
Don't know about Korres - so one can buy online from them -mmmm - very interesting - will try - thank you for a lovely comment dear friend . Hugs and love, Jennifer.
Date: 6/20/2020 1:53:00 PM
Enjoyed your verse Jennifer, kids always ask questions and it's up to a us to give them answers and to guide them on the right path. Tom
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:27:00 AM
Absolutely, but some parents are too lazy or too involved in their own lives and leave their children to their own devices - in fact they shouldn't be parents, social security should give them and put them up for adoption to people who are desperate to be parents. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 6/20/2020 12:36:00 PM
So unique a rendition of so strong convictions! You are made of Love, Light and Faith.. Your words are a huge flow of what is in your deep well of Beauty! Dear Jenny, I'm so captivated by your deep and genuine message.. so sincere is your call! So expressive are your words! A poetry of depth and value! So pleased to read, soul sister! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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Date: 7/3/2020 9:21:00 AM
And I don't have a daughter - I have two sons, but if I had a daughter I would still speak to her as I wrote in my poem and as I spoke to our sons! If children do not have the guidance of parents, which I have seen happening, they grow up a little rogue. Sad but true my dear dear friend. Your wonderful comment has touched me and has in fact touched my very core - love and hugs, Jennifer.

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