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Moments In Time

Eternal moments, Live in memories, Of past sunshine and, Roses in the room, Where nothing now blooms! Pearly smiles bright, And party hues. Evening skies stained, And leaves falling. Memory, is magic, like the moon. Or love, in bloom. Sweet! Written on 1/5/2021 For: A Diminished Hexaverse Contest Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 1/6/2021 10:02:00 AM
Memory is certainly a wonderful thing, a lovely poem in Diminished Hexaverse form Evelyn... Belle
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2021 3:55:00 PM
Your positive remarks are so much appreciated, Belle. :=)
Date: 1/6/2021 1:59:00 AM
Things will change for the better, my friend. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2021 8:54:00 AM
They always seem to. Thank you. :=)
Date: 1/5/2021 7:01:00 PM
Lovely Evelyn. It gave me a mental picture of a person sitting alone reminiscing about happy times gone by. A fine write. God Bless, JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2021 8:53:00 AM
I am glad to hear that this poem provided such pleasant mental images. Thank you for letting me know. Blessings and Happy New Year, Evelyn
Date: 1/5/2021 4:21:00 PM
what a charming and romantic poem Judy I do enjoy reading and writing this form, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/5/2021 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Jan, for your lovely, memorable remarks. hugs xx :=)

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