Moment of Truth


I was walking with two friends of mine,
when we saw a woman
who was tall, beautiful and black
They spoke lewd to her,
so she didn't speak back
In their rejected anger,
they cursed her in a cruel, mean tone
That's when I interceded,
and said leave the poor woman alone
My two friends looked at me
like I was some kinda traitor
That day we parted ways,
there would be no more days of "see ya later"

In a moment of truth,
will you stand up for the truth?
Or will you back down,
and keep your mouth shut?

It's moments like those
that reveal what manner of person you are
Will you be naked or clothed?
Will your spirit be dark,
or will it shine like a star?

Nobody ever said friendships are forever,
not when you have to compromise
your integrity in a matter

In a moment of truth,
don't keep your mouth closed
Let your voice roar
like a lion, strong and bold!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/6/2017 11:21:00 PM
I love this write, My mom taught me never let a man treat you bad or anyone else. I taught it to my 28 yr old daughter & talking with my 9 yr old granddaughter as well :)
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Date: 12/2/2016 4:11:00 AM
Well said and nicely put into poetry. Its a temptation to keep quiet when such situations arise.
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Date: 11/24/2016 12:17:00 PM
Now more than ever! A very timely poem with a timeless message!
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Date: 11/12/2016 9:42:00 PM
Great poem , great message . Let truth and honor always stand above all. If one does that and friends object to it then let not such be your friends. Closing stanza sums its up perfectly . A7 and a fav with this gem.
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Date: 11/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
There is so much truth in your write, Freddie:) it's never essential to stick to 'friends' when they are wrong, for if they are really true friends, they'll mend their ways:) congratulations on POTD:) keep roaring aloud:)
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Date: 11/6/2016 3:37:00 AM
There is a strong message in this beautiful poem. It's good to be highlighted! Congratulations for the "poem of the day"!
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Date: 11/6/2016 2:33:00 AM
beautifully spiritual - thank you for it
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:23:00 PM
Rated 7 on this one. I really appreciate how meaningful this is. Thank you for writing something so poignant. COngratulations on getting poem of the day. Much deserved.
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Date: 11/5/2016 1:20:00 PM
A terrific poem and choice for potd congratulations Freddie
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Date: 11/5/2016 1:02:00 PM
Ty everyone. I am so humbled and honored by y'all gracious words. I am indebted to y'all because I am inspired by y'all. I will always come straight from the heart. Love each and every one of you. Romantic Warrior says peace out.
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Date: 11/5/2016 10:03:00 AM
Freddie, congratulations on potd with this great write ~
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:59:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD, Freddie. I'm so happy your poem was chosen. Really nice job, my friend:)
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Date: 11/5/2016 7:39:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I'm so happy to see you get such an honor. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-))) Alexis
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Date: 11/5/2016 7:24:00 AM
- A perfect message ... a great poem, Freddie! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2016 5:02:00 AM
CONGRATS ON MAKING POTD. BY DOING SO, YOU LIFTED HER SPIRITS UP AGAIN. A 7. GOD BLESS AND ENJOY YOUR DAY.
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Date: 11/5/2016 4:33:00 AM
Well done RW. POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:24:00 PM
Good one, Freddie....remaining true to your core can be risky, but the reward is great....jimbo
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Date: 11/4/2016 5:36:00 AM
Silence is consent, yet my pen is not spent. Enjoyed the lesson brotha. Peace....!!!
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Date: 11/3/2016 7:56:00 PM
I can imagine you giving them 'what for' RW. Good on ya too. You don't need friends like that mate. Well penned RW.
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Date: 11/3/2016 4:44:00 PM
Friends and I use the term loosely, are just that. Every man should be his own man/woman with their own values and morals. Any man who would compromise his integrity just to have a "friend" is not much of a man or a "friend". I love this one Freddie. Great message!
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Date: 11/3/2016 4:13:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this well written piece and it's message as well. Standing up for truth takes courage but not standing for truth is just the opposite. If this is true, that woman that you showed kindness is forever grateful. Either way I enjoyed the read. A big seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/3/2016 3:02:00 PM
Perfect! Very well written. I am in agreement with this. Love the ending too, as I love Lions. :) A FAV
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Date: 11/3/2016 2:47:00 PM
Good question, I know I couldn't stand back and watch another being ridiculed or hurt in any way. And keeping my big mouth shut has never been something I am good at. people deserve kindness and respect until they prove otherwise. Great message
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