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Whose kisses we find loving Whose hugs are really warm It's just where our world lies I would define her as 'mom'. She swallows all our pain To do things which are must And spend whole of her life To do what is just For just one scratch She lets her tear flow To make us drink elixer She can drink the poison whole To make us sleep comfortably Her eyes remain open all night long It's just where our world lies I would define her as 'mom'. All our sadness vanishes With just a pleasant kiss And if we are ever in danger She would stand against as a cliff From our first breath Till our heart beat stops We'd find her hand in ours Showing a path to walk If we have nothing to eat She has strength to give her all It's just where our world lies I would define her as 'mom'. So open your sleeves wide To give her all we can And let her smile be big After telling where she stands........

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Date: 6/26/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you all for this wonderful support..... Well it encouraged me a lot as I was only in 7th standard when I wrote it..... I've read many poems here and I found them spectacular..... It gave me ideas how to improve your poetry........ I am grateful I am here.....
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Date: 6/26/2016 4:45:00 AM
Vijay, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:00:00 AM
Shubhi,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:51:00 PM
Shubhi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/25/2016 1:48:00 PM
Shubhi, thank you for sharing this lovely post. Linda'
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Date: 6/25/2016 1:27:00 PM
Nice to see your family write, thanks for sharing. SHUBHI...SKAT
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