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Diminished Hexaverse
A poem containing stanzas of 5 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 2 lines, ending with one word. The syllables in each stanza correspond to the number of lines, i.e. 5 in each line in the first stanza, 4 in the second stanza and so on.



The first voice I heard I heard from your womb an angelic sound that brought me comfort and lulled me to sleep I would listen to what you'd say each inflection mesmerizing You would speak so softly I felt loved Each time you spoke mom (Diminished Hexaverse) Jan. 20, 22019 Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/9/2019 9:24:00 PM
This is adorable, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/28/2019 8:03:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful emile, am adding this gem to my faves:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/28/2019 12:06:00 AM
Congrats. Thanks for letting me remember my MOM thru your great poem. God bless you.
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/27/2019 3:39:00 PM
I would love to go back in time (maybe through regression hypnotherapy) to actually get the feeling of this poem, Emile. Well done. Congrats on an excellent win.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2019 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, such lovely comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/27/2019 8:00:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem of the love for a mother from her son. Excellent poem,Emile and so well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Charles, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/20/2019 2:08:00 PM
Edward, this is so beautiful and a great tribute to a mother's love. I'm sure Charlie will love it too!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/20/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.