Moisture

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Fog's tennacles wrap around the porch Coating with damp the vision Oak tree's buds laden with moisture Will explode with precision Soon oak will release a pollen load, fill the air with gold Cripple so many folks who were Strong, brave and very bold unfinished..

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Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2015 9:36:00 AM

Sara, beautiful words to accompany that beautiful picture, even in its unfinished form it is amazing and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2015 9:07:00 AM

- Beautifully already, Sara !!!! - I wish you a lovely day - // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/12/2015 1:05:00 AM

A beautiful flowing stanza...I hope there's more to come! Hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2015 6:08:00 PM

keep going. You are off to a good start.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/11/2015 3:49:00 PM

Hello Sara, true observations of creations gems here, I see Its ' unfinished' that gives me pause for thought.. What in The world is ever finished, I wonder would the word unfinished be as the title really set it off..? Just a thought..

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/11/2015 1:00:00 PM

Your words graced the page with a flow of poetic creativity and finesse. Beautiful. Emile. #7