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Mobile phone I have lived in a time my phone at home I survived all day this way I see young mothers pushing pram phone in hand I see the nation connecting to their station I see drivers phone in hand equal to a drunken man I see shock on people’s faces listening to their conversation I see people panic not plugging in might be a sin I feel so sad to see so many missing out present glory I count myself so lucky dog and bone at home mindful walks happy talks face to face rain and wind squirrel’s running up a tree leaves falling slowly smells taken in from all around nothing is more profound over whelming all we have touch smell see sound taste the air mobile phone I keep at home my present moment no rehearsal Niall Fulham

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Date: 9/28/2017 12:34:00 PM
Well captured perceptions.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 9/29/2017 9:02:00 AM
Hi Line , thank you for comment , drives me mad to see so many people wasting there moment ::)))) hugs
Date: 4/20/2017 12:05:00 AM
cute little poem. I tell my daughter that all the time. Thank you for reading my Like An Angel :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/20/2017 11:28:00 AM
Hi Debbie , thanks hugs:))))
Date: 4/19/2017 6:50:00 PM
I love this poem!! I have a semi-similar one, but from the eyes of a 16 year old. I think they would be interesting to compare. I lived with out any screens for two years while I was at boarding school, so it is possible. Again, Amazing write. ~returning your hug with a hug from the USA
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/19/2017 11:47:00 PM
Hi Elissa, I have commented on a few of your writes proper talent keep up your writes and thanks again for your comments:))) hugs
Date: 4/9/2017 12:35:00 PM
- Mobile phones can or has created many traffic accidents - and young mothers should be more concerned with their kids - Mobile phone is here to stay ... the technology develops ... we have to accept it ... but we have to use our heads - A great poem, welcome to poetry soup Niall :)- Hope you will enjoy :) - hugs from Norway ... Sun :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/9/2017 1:01:00 PM
Hi Sunshine ,Thanks for comment so true

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