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Mist Hangs Her Body

mist hangs her body

close to his softness blending 

early morning chill

separated no longer

hardness enters disappears





(February 9, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Christine A Kysely

March 15, 2011 at 1:53 PM

Thank you all so very much!!! My Internet hasn't been working so I have had no idea!!! OMG!!! Thank you!!! <3

Christine A Kysely

March 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM

Thank you all so very much!!! My Internet hasn't been working so I have had no idea!!! OMG!!! Thank you!!! <3

George Aul

February 28, 2011 at 10:42 AM

Congrats on your win.....George

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 25, 2011 at 6:11 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Debbie, Christine

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 25, 2011 at 9:58 AM

Congratulations on your win Christine, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

February 24, 2011 at 4:58 PM

Dreamy...and meaningful (smile)..congrats on your win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2011 at 7:03 AM

Congrats Christine on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write ..enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2011 at 9:47 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Christine! Luv, Andrea

Dr Hitendra Mehta

February 23, 2011 at 9:09 PM

Many congrats Christine on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Kash Poet

February 23, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Beautiful write Christine!Congrats on your big win in the contest of Debbie!!--kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

February 20, 2011 at 1:37 PM

I really really like this tanka ;) any chance you could enter my contest "We Aren't Japanese but Please.."[no title other than line 1 is necessary ex: ---mist hangs her body] capitalization is seldom used in japanese forms nor punctuation..this content is exactly what a lover would write back to the man who sent her a haiku!

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