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Missing You

Let me tell you about a game i play Where i close my eye's and fade away I float away to a special place Beyond the star's and moon and space In this special place you see There are only two people,Just you and me In this place,All is right Nothing but love,And we never fight In this place,There is no sadness No cell's,No court's,None of that madness No bar's to hold us or separate No one to tell us we can't kiss or touch I don't just tell you I love you,I show you how much But eventually the game must end My eye's must open,And reality set's in But someday soon,I'm not sure when I will close my eye's and play my game again

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Date: 6/16/2016 1:46:00 PM
Paula, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:14:00 PM
Paula,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:08:00 AM
A very warm welcome Paula! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to visit my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Paula :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:04:00 AM
Hi Paula, thank you for sharing this excellent piece. It is such a powerful write. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Kindest regards.
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:33:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Paula. Best wishes to you in your difficulties. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/24/2014 4:25:00 AM
Oh what a sad write I hope things work out for you. Hugs Jan xxx
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