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Missing Those Days

Into my childhood, a little sweet memory When summer vacations used to be fun Impatient at last exam day Thrilled, overjoyed to go To meet grandma and grandpa at our native place Train journey making it more exciting A night's train travel would take us in the morning To grandma's house - grandpa with smiling face Would take us inside with gait slow Holidays spent full play With cousin brothers reaching, more mischief begun After dinner, time for grandpa's story Every morning after breakfast we would hurry To go out and play under the hot sun From garden, a short walk away A few stone steps below We had our own house pond at a vast lush green space Where we enjoyed much swimming and playing Dated: 12/31/2020 Submitted for: 'A Little Memory - My Invented Form' Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Constance La France Syllables: 12/10/8/6/12/10 12/10/8/6/12/10 12/10/8/6/12/10

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Date: 1/21/2021 3:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Reads like an exciting time at your grandparents home. Memories(at least some)are a good thing. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/21/2021 5:12:00 AM
Sara thank you so much for the visit and congrats. Yes they were fun filled days which I miss. Have a blessed lovely day :)
Date: 1/19/2021 12:00:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, excellent poem, I love it _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/20/2021 1:51:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much for this interesting contest. I enjoyed writing for this. Am happy you liked it. I saw your next contest too. That is also interesting. If my brain gives me good ideas, I will surely participate dear friend. Lol. Hugs :)
Date: 1/4/2021 3:30:00 AM
What touching sentimental memories my dear friend Anitha - I know just what you mean and mine have just come rushing back to me. HAPPY 2021 TO YOU AND YOURS ANITHA Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/20/2021 1:48:00 AM
Jenni, thank you so much dear friend for the lovely visit and comment. Hugs :)
Date: 12/31/2020 7:25:00 PM
Great... Anitha.... Happy New Year to you and to your family... I wish this year brings a collection of happy moments for you....
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/1/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Rohit. Wishing you and yours a very happy 2021 too. God bless. :)
Date: 12/31/2020 5:24:00 PM
oh my gosh, I am so stupid. I am reading this and realizing that I failed to keep to her syllable count when I wrote my poeem yesterday. OMG. it is a good thing I did not post my entry yet. BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD, as they say when a person has completely messed something up. You did GREAT with this one, dear.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/1/2021 4:19:00 AM
Oh Andrea... Oh is it... Lol... but pls don't call yourself stupid even for fun... I know your INTELLIGENCE level and I am only trying to learn from people like you....yes, the syllable count and the rhyme makes it more interesting and fun to do. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Will be reading your poem once you post it... Hugs :)
Date: 12/31/2020 1:50:00 AM
Who would not miss those past days now gone for ever. Great poem. Happy New Year. ~~
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/1/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor for the visit and comment. Yes, missing childhood is something many will relate.. Happy New Year and best regards to you too.. :)

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