Missing

Here goes...
she said
it loudly and
proudly:

Hello…
l`m a miss
and  l miss 
you inside out

Truly…
I miss you like
bees really miss
their honey

Wow…
water for my thirst
food for my hunger
scratch for my itch

Well…
want to take
to you like 
duck to water

Oh…
you draw me
to you like
moth to light 

Yes…
you are my cake
my cup of goodies
my hot ice-cream

Indeed…
at night my moon
daytime my sun
your love my light

Relax…
take a seat
I sold that heater
for your heat

Please…
you bathe in milk 
l bask in your presence
a sublime quench

Finally…
what she did not
say is that we`re close
strangers on the net!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/13/2015 8:38:00 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:24:00 PM
very good and descriptive poem Ndaba and welcome to soup hugs 7
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 6/6/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/12/2014 7:38:00 AM
Very sweet write, Ndaba. :) Loved the analogies throughout. Love makes life sweet....like those goodies!
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/12/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Eileen.
Date: 9/1/2014 5:50:00 AM
Problems of social networks are brilliantly exposed
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for those words of encouragement.
Date: 8/31/2014 7:05:00 AM
brilliant pen full of both wisdom and humour nice to meet you and ty for lovely comment on Born A New hugs
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:04:00 AM
Thank you. It was my pleasure.
Date: 8/11/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thus us a really good poem.. Also coz it's different From the usual poems it's even better. Come check out my poems. :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/30/2014 4:43:00 PM
Talicia, thank you.
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Secrets Inyoureyes
Date: 8/11/2014 9:09:00 AM
Oops, I meant to write this
Date: 5/7/2014 6:18:00 PM
dropping by to say hello. I enjoyed rereading this piece.
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Date: 5/6/2014 12:56:00 PM
Tjo, Tjo!hai shame. Im stunned. Beautiful poem, beautiful.
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Date: 5/2/2014 6:42:00 PM
Good write very unique... Gina
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Date: 5/1/2014 6:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this...made me smile.
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:13:00 AM
Romance, beauty, and humor. Love the twist at the end.
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Date: 4/23/2014 1:38:00 PM
- A poem I read with a smile - well done Ndaba! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:46:00 AM
Nice read
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:17:00 AM
Internet romance, I have not experienced this phenomenon. I found this very interesting.
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Date: 4/22/2014 6:29:00 PM
I like the twist at the end. It gave it a touch of humor to contrast the seriousness to the romance..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:37:00 PM
Interesting and funny write very beautifully penned my friend. I welcome you on this lovely place we know as Poetry Soup and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. With best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:21:00 PM
Very nicely penned Ndaba...cyberspace romance has its own charm
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:06:00 PM
Lol, too funny!
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