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Here goes... she said it loudly and proudly: Hello… l`m a miss and l miss you inside out Truly… I miss you like bees really miss their honey Wow… water for my thirst food for my hunger scratch for my itch Well… want to take to you like duck to water Oh… you draw me to you like moth to light Yes… you are my cake my cup of goodies my hot ice-cream Indeed… at night my moon daytime my sun your love my light Relax… take a seat I sold that heater for your heat Please… you bathe in milk l bask in your presence a sublime quench Finally… what she did not say is that we`re close strangers on the net!

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Date: 10/13/2015 8:38:00 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:24:00 PM
very good and descriptive poem Ndaba and welcome to soup hugs 7
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 6/6/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/12/2014 7:38:00 AM
Very sweet write, Ndaba. :) Loved the analogies throughout. Love makes life sweet....like those goodies!
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/12/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Eileen.
Date: 9/1/2014 5:50:00 AM
Problems of social networks are brilliantly exposed
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for those words of encouragement.
Date: 8/31/2014 7:05:00 AM
brilliant pen full of both wisdom and humour nice to meet you and ty for lovely comment on Born A New hugs
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:04:00 AM
Thank you. It was my pleasure.
Date: 8/11/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thus us a really good poem.. Also coz it's different From the usual poems it's even better. Come check out my poems. :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/30/2014 4:43:00 PM
Talicia, thank you.
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Secrets inyoureyes
Date: 8/11/2014 9:09:00 AM
Oops, I meant to write this
Date: 5/7/2014 6:18:00 PM
dropping by to say hello. I enjoyed rereading this piece.
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Date: 5/6/2014 12:56:00 PM
Tjo, Tjo!hai shame. Im stunned. Beautiful poem, beautiful.
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Date: 5/2/2014 6:42:00 PM
Good write very unique... Gina
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Date: 5/1/2014 6:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this...made me smile.
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:13:00 AM
Romance, beauty, and humor. Love the twist at the end.
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Date: 4/23/2014 1:38:00 PM
- A poem I read with a smile - well done Ndaba! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:46:00 AM
Nice read
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:17:00 AM
Internet romance, I have not experienced this phenomenon. I found this very interesting.
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Date: 4/22/2014 6:29:00 PM
I like the twist at the end. It gave it a touch of humor to contrast the seriousness to the romance..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:37:00 PM
Interesting and funny write very beautifully penned my friend. I welcome you on this lovely place we know as Poetry Soup and thank you for your kind words on my Mulberry Poem. With best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:21:00 PM
Very nicely penned Ndaba...cyberspace romance has its own charm
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:06:00 PM
Lol, too funny!
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