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I’m straying away from the norm It’s stressing me out to conform A fave form I must adjust - The last line’s bitten the dust! Sweet Nina is causing mischief I’m sobbing, she’s causing me grief Limerick’s are divine - This one’s missing a line! My chosen form now has mutated It’s modern, the old ones outdated Will my new form catch on Now the last line has gone! I’ve invented the ‘slimerick’ it’s a traditional limerick form but with the final line missing! Mischief Contest Sponsor Nina Parmenter 9/5/18

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Date: 11/17/2018 3:53:00 PM
Hahaha- you made me laugh. I myself haven't a clue, as this to me is all new, but I like your fun and dry sense of humour and your wicked, Slimerick!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/17/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Damian I just adore the limerick form it appeals to my silly sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2018 4:55:00 PM
You are making more mischief than me I see Jan. Congratulations to you too!
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Date: 11/9/2018 5:02:00 PM
I am so behind at soup jean, just trying to catch up a little and ninas contest was such fun:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/5/2018 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, got a feeling this will take off. Tom.
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Date: 10/5/2018 3:18:00 AM
Thanks Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/4/2018 7:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you now, Jan, on your fine placement in the contest! It was great to read it again. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/4/2018 5:17:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS, Jan! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/4/2018 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations Jan, you have scored the one and only fourth place in my contest! (I gave 1-5 individual placings) I actually really like the slimerick! It’s going to catch on here even if not in the rest of the world!
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:26:00 PM
I'm delighted to be on your list and it would be a legacy to my poop poetry to get slimericks recognised as a poetry form lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/2/2018 12:14:00 PM
Love your " slimerick" Fun! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:21:00 PM
thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 6:59:00 AM
You've got to watch those mutants; they can really throw ya! This was great! Congrat's, too.
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much ML:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/17/2018 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on POT (the last letter is missing)! Well-done, Jan! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/12/2018 1:44:00 AM
I like I like, I might give this a go, and congrats on POTD.
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Art:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2018 10:09:00 PM
G'day Jan … this is great. It sort of urges me to write my own last line - well done Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay, its so difficult to sit on your hands and not write that final line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2018 12:06:00 AM
- Congratulations on the p.o.t.d. Jan - Super as always ... I have to try a 'slimerick' sometime in the future :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:50:00 PM
Its quite fun to do Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2018 12:56:00 PM
I love it Jan, and think I may be able to write one if it doesn't need to be funny. I think you nailed it with your new form! Congratulations on having it deservingly honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:39:00 PM
I'll have to try a contest when this one is judged:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/8/2018 10:03:00 AM
I likes it! Congratulations Jan, this recognition may help it catch on...
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2018 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Jan, great name slimerick, so clever and thoroughly enjoyed your well written poem. :))
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:35:00 PM
Cheers Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 6:24:00 PM
Haha... Nice new form Jan..Congrats on POTD
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 6:19:00 PM
this is SUPER clever, Jan. And POTD already?? Wow!
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:30:00 AM
will it catch on Andrea!:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 6:04:00 PM
Very clever, Jan. I like it. And, congrats on POTD too.
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Carole:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 4:18:00 PM
Congrats!!! on your 'slimerick' and POTD!...my funny friend...love & slimming...^WW^
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
Cute new poem form, Jan! Very creative and congrats on your POTD! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:21:00 AM
I wonder if it will catch on lol:-) Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 9:23:00 AM
Jan, you are so versatile in your poems! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 8:53:00 AM
How clever you are ,Jan. I enjoyed this very much. Congratulations on POTD. ~ Warren. :)
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 8:22:00 AM
And it turned out good...Congratulation in order...All the best Jan
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 6:18:00 AM
Yay! Back with potd congrats! A splendid day to you Jan! xomo! <3
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:16:00 AM
Cheers Mo:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2018 6:15:00 AM
Good Morning Jan. Congratulations with your entry being chosen POTD. And yes, congratulations on your new and own creation and expansion of the limerick. How exciting for you. May this day find you well.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/1/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Lisa:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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