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Mirrors Age

As morn braces against the emptiness of night And cock crows echo in waves of yellow light Fallen mixed colors brush along the coarseness’ of stone As fall would have them, these leaves of gold Age as time moving swiftly through coveted hope Laid far along twisted roads, yearning there and then to be not parted here, have alas a distance near But what of it, who so best to have it, more! I tire now on thinking further, and would love to simply settle On piles of leaves bright along the way To answer no more to things that must stay ‘Cause with any wisdom here, I would have experienced it there On piles of leaves I will stay, and rest a time before another day And should it be the last of things, then so be it, for I would have had what it was before its last, and what more can I ask - to take on roads we can not stand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/13/2014 9:57:00 PM
Wonderful and well penned write, abel, congrats
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:51:00 PM
The only way to conquer our fears is to face them.... This was a beautiful write with a great usage of metaphors. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/7/2014 7:20:00 AM
oh that was so beautiful
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Date: 9/30/2014 8:50:00 AM
Abel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:28:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Abel - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2014 7:44:00 PM
A Big Welcome to Poetry Soup Abel. Your poem is brilliantly crafted with profound meaning. I look forward to enjoying more of your work! Blessings, Connie
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