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Mirrored Fragments

co-existence in the mirror fragment split second views/collision of life lines found in the sounds of shattering scattered ~ in broken glass ~ brevity, eye to eye, then breathe forever at angles chasing passing lives

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/30/2024 9:37:00 PM

This is really nice. So many people suddenly appear when mirrors break. Hopefully, they're all friendly.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/30/2024 11:10:00 PM

Gosh there's some scary interpretations of this one I hadn't considered! To me it was over my shoulder someone I know from another life time, glimpsed just for a moment. I suppose you do see a lot of yourself in a broken mirror too and frightening they'll look in different directions as you turn and you can only look one in the eye at a time - eek!

John Lawless

Date: 1/30/2024 12:38:00 PM

very nice DD, a poser of a poem, a glimpse into the split personalities of humankind....especially like the last line.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/30/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thanks John, in my mind this was more parallel universes and way we sometimes glimpse things out of place but known. I see what you mean though and glad you liked it enough to leave a comment, always an honour :)