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Minus Season

There are no seasons for you anymore, since you chose to leave us for death's favor. No day to await or night to savor. And so now left to me, still lips curl a child's bittersweet smile, April's breath hangs on the orchid's gloom, but I've no mind to bear such ironic blooms. And so now left of me, only shade to labor, hiensight to see. There are no seasons for me either. No days to await or nights to savor. Just a haunted heart that limps to linger. 8/10/15

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Sizwe Hlabisa

Date: 8/22/2015 5:12:00 AM

Congrats Chad. And a belated welcum

Chad Knight
Date: 8/23/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Sizwe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2015 6:55:00 PM

Hi Chad, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~

Chad Knight
Date: 8/23/2015 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Linda

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 3:01:00 PM

Chad, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**

Chad Knight
Date: 8/23/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/17/2015 9:29:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win Chad! Great emotive work!

Chad Knight
Date: 8/17/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, that's wonderful to hear

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/16/2015 1:57:00 AM

Very moving, congratulations.

Chad Knight
Date: 8/17/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thank you very much!

John Lawless

Date: 8/15/2015 5:15:00 PM

Chad, the opening couplet opens the door to the abyss of a lonely emptiness. Congrats on you placement in the contest.

Chad Knight
Date: 8/15/2015 5:28:00 PM

Thanks John!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 12:07:00 PM

very sad one. Well done, Poet!

Chad Knight

Date: 8/15/2015 9:23:00 AM

Oh wow! That's so awesome and encouraging! Thank you very much. Now, to the drawing board again Isuppose. Thanks again it means alot, turning this raw heart a window, of now recognized expression.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 7:36:00 AM

A very well done third place win, congrats

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/15/2015 2:02:00 AM

Chad, congrats on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis

Chad Knight

Date: 8/14/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thank you all for the warm welcomes. And thanks LyricMan for the kind words. I have read a couple of poems from each of you so far and I look forward to reading more and offering comments. Thanks again and I'm glad to be with you at PoetrySoup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 12:20:00 AM

Chad, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2015 4:52:00 PM

Chad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT