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Closed Path

Beginnings are endings. We wander in circles. Closed path integral – zero, promising potential. We arrive where we started, but with more wisdom. Endings are beginnings. 10/17/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/17/2018 1:26:00 PM

Love the circularity in this piece, Agnes.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/31/2017 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this philosophical write, Agnes, I don't think I understand it fully yet:)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/31/2017 6:48:00 PM

Thank you, Jo. I am not sure i understand it either :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2017 11:05:00 AM

This has a philosophical slant to it, Agnes. So I take it that, the more laps we do, the wiser we become! Then, in the last lap we reach the maximum! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/31/2017 6:49:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. Perhaps this is what it means.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2017 8:51:00 PM

very good to see this one in top three. Congrats, Agnes.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2017 6:39:00 PM

Many congrats Agnes I love the direction you took with the theme:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2017 5:43:00 PM

Agnes, congratulations on your win well done..I love the part but with more wisdom :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Eve.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2017 5:08:00 PM

a creative effort well rewarded... applause to you for a great win, agnes, and thanks for being part of this contest..

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:34:00 PM

Thank you very much for my win, Nette - I am so glad you liked my poem.

Rick Parise

Date: 10/17/2017 7:21:00 PM

The revolving doorway of wisdom... as soon as it ended, with a resonating voice......again it began Love all the thoughts your words paint within my mind... Lovely..

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 8:25:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Rick, and for your kind comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2017 3:27:00 PM

that is SO nice for someone who does not share my feelings on the afterlife, but I know you believe at least something of each individual goes on! Great writing as usual, Agnes. About triolet form, you should visit them in the search engine. Or see more of mine by clicking "form" I have written many many in this lovely little form and Lucidity is not my best work in that form. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Andrea. I will check out the triolets, sounds like lots of fun.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/17/2017 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful Agnes, in an engaging minimalist sort of way...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/17/2017 2:52:00 PM

Fabulous pen Agnes! My best to you for the contest! :) xomo

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen.