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Closed Path

Beginnings are endings. We wander
in circles. Closed path integral –
zero, promising potential. We arrive 
where we started, but with 
more wisdom. Endings are beginnings.

10/17/2017

lifefree verse

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Line Gauthier

September 17, 2018 at 1:26 PM

Love the circularity in this piece, Agnes.

Joanna Daniel

October 31, 2017 at 9:45 AM

Congratulations on your win with this philosophical write, Agnes, I don't think I understand it fully yet:)

Agnes Krampe

October 31, 2017 at 6:48 PM

Thank you, Jo. I am not sure i understand it either :)

Paul Callus

October 27, 2017 at 11:05 AM

This has a philosophical slant to it, Agnes. So I take it that, the more laps we do, the wiser we become! Then, in the last lap we reach the maximum! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

October 31, 2017 at 6:49 PM

Thank you, Paul. Perhaps this is what it means.

Andrea Dietrich

October 22, 2017 at 8:51 PM

very good to see this one in top three. Congrats, Agnes.

Agnes Krampe

October 25, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison

October 21, 2017 at 6:39 PM

Many congrats Agnes I love the direction you took with the theme:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

October 25, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Eve Roper

October 21, 2017 at 5:43 PM

Agnes, congratulations on your win well done..I love the part but with more wisdom :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Agnes Krampe

October 25, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Thank you, Eve.

Nette Onclaud

October 21, 2017 at 5:08 PM

a creative effort well rewarded... applause to you for a great win, agnes, and thanks for being part of this contest..

Agnes Krampe

October 25, 2017 at 8:34 PM

Thank you very much for my win, Nette - I am so glad you liked my poem.

Andrea Dietrich

October 17, 2017 at 3:27 PM

that is SO nice for someone who does not share my feelings on the afterlife, but I know you believe at least something of each individual goes on! Great writing as usual, Agnes. About triolet form, you should visit them in the search engine. Or see more of mine by clicking "form" I have written many many in this lovely little form and Lucidity is not my best work in that form. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it.

Agnes Krampe

October 17, 2017 at 3:31 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Andrea. I will check out the triolets, sounds like lots of fun.