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On Closed Path

Closure I would aim at, As did the little one In Tagore’s poem Closed Path. But Derrida has warned me: Language is an open system! *** Composed on October 19, 2017 Winner, Poetry contest, sponsored by nette onclaud, Oct. 22, 2017.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/22/2017 7:03:00 AM

Congrats Ram, for your WIN with this fine piece! ;-)

Ram R. V.
Date: 10/22/2017 7:05:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy, for your fine sentiment:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2017 5:52:00 PM

Ram, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Ram R. V.
Date: 10/21/2017 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for your warm congratulatory response:-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2017 5:44:00 PM

good communication opens doors, ram... i would have placed this higher if there were no reference to tagore... splendid piece which makes it to the list, just the same.. thanks for joining!

Ram R. V.
Date: 10/21/2017 5:56:00 PM

Thank you, nette, for your compliment:-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/19/2017 7:44:00 AM

A fine pen my friend! Enjoyed! My best to you :) xomo!

Ram R. V.
Date: 10/19/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, mo, for you prompt response and your warm wishes. Above all, I'm immensely happy if you, my mo, enjoyed my poem!

Ram R. V.
Date: 10/19/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, mo, for you prompt response and your warm wishes. Above all, I'm immensely happy if you, my mo, enjoyed my poem!