Ram R. V. Poet Free verse

On Closed Path

Closure I would aim at,
As did the little one
In Tagore’s poem Closed Path.
But Derrida has warned me:
Language is an open system!
 
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Composed on October 19, 2017

Winner, Poetry contest, sponsored by nette onclaud, Oct. 22, 2017.

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Teddy Kimathi October 22, 2017 at 7:03 AM Congrats Ram, for your WIN with this fine piece! ;-) Ram R. V. October 22, 2017 at 7:05 AM Thank you, Teddy, for your fine sentiment:-)

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 5:52 PM Ram, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`* Ram R. V. October 21, 2017 at 5:57 PM Thank you, Eve, for your warm congratulatory response:-)

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2017 at 5:44 PM good communication opens doors, ram... i would have placed this higher if there were no reference to tagore... splendid piece which makes it to the list, just the same.. thanks for joining! Ram R. V. October 21, 2017 at 5:56 PM Thank you, nette, for your compliment:-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 19, 2017 at 7:44 AM A fine pen my friend! Enjoyed! My best to you :) xomo! Ram R. V. October 19, 2017 at 7:48 AM Thank you, mo, for you prompt response and your warm wishes. Above all, I'm immensely happy if you, my mo, enjoyed my poem! Ram R. V. October 19, 2017 at 7:48 AM Thank you, mo, for you prompt response and your warm wishes. Above all, I'm immensely happy if you, my mo, enjoyed my poem!