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Minimalist--White Night

Iridescent cellar of midnight opens Where waterfall’s hair ripples down - Glossy locks splashing my face To rinse past’s unsolved omissions – Evening ivory bathing new promises. Minimalist Form Contest of nette onclaud 15th Oct 2017

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Date: 10/22/2017 8:48:00 PM
wow, this is OUTSTANDING and a well deserved win. Congrats, Lyva
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Date: 10/22/2017 2:52:00 PM
Great depiction and beautifully written, congratulations
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Date: 10/22/2017 6:42:00 AM
Cosmic imagery I may say! Congrats Lyva, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 7:27:00 PM
hmmmm
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:40:00 PM
Lyva, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/21/2017 4:40:00 PM
enjoyed how you used waterfall to depict the theme... beautifully done, lyva... warm congrats on your top slot and thanks for joining.. huggs
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