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Finally you reach heaven after all these years of trying to live right following the basic precepts of decency and humanity You weren't sure what to expect but you're pleasantly surprised by the surroundings It's hard to describe being so amazing, stupendous It's a delight to survive in this kingdom of lusciousness where everything is delicious, the utmost supreme ----- Endeavors materialize without any stress or strife Perfectly structured to make one feel divine, elated to be part of the celestial.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/23/2017 4:36:00 AM
Beautifully written Frank. I enjoyed the rhythm of it. Regards Nyla.
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:56:00 PM
That is certainly something to hope for! Intriguing write about the hereafter. Though I sense this has a touch of humor in it, on a serious note, I think the best part of heaven is being able to reconnect with those whom we have lost.
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