Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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2026-05-02 MINGLE Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Mingle

"I'm not afraid of storms, for I'm learning how to sail my ship." — Louisa May Alcott.

The rain and sleet mingle together.
     Wayward winds weigh me down,
     Wetting my poor old clothes thoroughly.
I walk alone through deep pools,
How can I not be shivering in the storm?

The wraithlike winds increase the wetness of my face,
Water seeps down my tattered clothes.
      I curse the closed shops and unsheltered houses.
      How can I survive this miserable downpour?
Dark Cimmerian clouds cover the whole city.
The forces of weather mingle thoroughly.
          I find no respite in such a mingle of a cyclone.

Let thunder wreak havoc in the hurricane,
I’ll find my strength by hook or by crook.
     I’ve learned there is a shelter I’ll find,
     A change of clothes, a purge of soul:
A mingle of hope, survival, and resilience
That somehow will cleanse my heart and teach it love.


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sara Etgen-Baker May 11, 2026 at 4:52 PM I appreciate the courage within your poem; especially liked the last few lines.

Ink Empress May 9, 2026 at 8:27 AM I sense and feel resilience and strength amidst all here dear victor, you always paint imagery so well and in such a descriptive manner that is truly engaging and moving! I really love the ending here, and mingle is a brilliant word, which iv never used in a poem before. I love your choice of quote and also the way youv written “I walk alone through deep pools, How can I not be shivering in the storm?” I alwayz feel questions more in a poem. Pleasure reading you. Sending you light always. Fave

Jan Allison May 8, 2026 at 3:56 PM great interpretation of the mingle theme and i love the uplifting ending Victor! hugs Jan xx

Joseph P. DiMino May 8, 2026 at 5:47 AM God sends us what we need, not to punish us...but to teach. Sometimes we need a severe bump on the head -- or storm. We really are in control. The reason for eternity. Great poem, Victor. Made me think deeper. Oh, a FAV for this fine work.

Paige Hind May 7, 2026 at 6:23 PM This is very resilient sounding...well done for the contest!!

Beryl Edmonds May 7, 2026 at 2:21 PM Dear Victor, when you’ve walked through a storm and have arrived safely home, you realise you never walked alone. There’s someone out there who mingles with you, seeing you safe till your door is shut to… Beryl

I Am Anaya May 6, 2026 at 5:10 PM When the world is upside which way is north, you seem to have found your through the hardships of life, great imagery. A dramatic verse & best for a top win. May blessings

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 6, 2026 at 3:46 PM Spiritual strength is a powerful match against the storms of life. I love the way you've woven this tale, Victor. Best wishes for the contest.

Bj Legros Kelley May 6, 2026 at 3:37 PM Your poem paints vivid pictures, Victor, well done!

Eve Roper May 6, 2026 at 3:32 PM Enjoyed reading your poem of a storm the great idea for the word mingle. Storms make me nervous. I’ve always been afraid of lightning and heavy rain. Roper always enjoyed the sound of rain. This is a good poem for a win. Good luck hugs.

Heidi Sands May 6, 2026 at 1:32 PM Great poem Victor. I like how you used Mingle too. It is downpour rain here today. :)

Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2026 at 12:09 PM Your "Mingle" is a wonderful read/write/story with a great picture. I have been in a number of very bad storms. One was when my dad opened the car door then water came running out. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a great/fun day writing away.......

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2026 at 10:07 AM Wow. Impressive how you used the idea of mingle in two different ways. Very nicely done

Sotto Poet May 6, 2026 at 8:35 AM Seeking solace in shadows feels so sorrowful. Though drenched in droplets, your heart still shines softly. A glorious jewel for the contest.

Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2026 at 5:32 AM Yes, storms will do that, if we hold onto patience and peace of mind. Hugs

Valsa George May 6, 2026 at 5:04 AM An unexpected cyclone can drench us. Finding no shelter in such a time is so miserable. Though your body is soaked in water, your spirit stays warm. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor.

Sara Kendrick May 6, 2026 at 4:11 AM This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest, Victor. I like it. Way to go. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough May 6, 2026 at 2:46 AM Your words went to my heart. It seemed so real that I began to worry about you out in the rain and cold. Good luck with the contest. I'd give you an A+.

Tom Cunningham May 6, 2026 at 1:16 AM Love your interpretation of the contest theme Victor, everyone I've seen has interpreted it diffently. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your week head. Tom