Mine

Star lights twinkles in your eyes lips tease with tickling tongue spare not the rods stroking girth mine the depths of night

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:34:00 PM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your wonderful win! As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 4:18:00 PM

D.G.~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/22/2011 7:39:00 PM

wow Debbie. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb, on your spicy win! Luv ya, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2011 9:43:00 AM

jeepers, lights! you really punped ut up... thumbs up for the win! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:30:00 AM

Oh my goodness Deb, it is really hot ;-) Congratulations to you

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:14:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win ...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:09:00 AM

This was a hot one!! Congrat my dear...luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 6:05:00 AM

Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/10/2011 2:26:00 PM

anyone see the play on words with the title?? mine/ to plumb the depth ..mine/ my own

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 2:00:00 PM

I just love your own comment below Deborah. Phew! hot and spicy, me thinks nicey....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2011 8:19:00 PM

Hello, D.G., good luck in the contest,.. enjoyed your poem,.. by the way.. read my latest poem and go correct me.. he he! I can use a little bit of schooling right now,, always,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2011 8:54:00 AM

Passionate..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2011 10:42:00 PM

ooh, la la, Deb. Such a unique way of putting things!

James Peranteau

Date: 1/3/2011 8:01:00 AM

This write dear poet is just awesome ! Now I will not be the able soul to post a write today; I'll be dwelling on this all day, it is truly a glimps into your poetic gift Debbie ! Into mine favz if'n ya don't mind ! much love and a very happy New Year to you and yours !!!!! james

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 4:29:00 AM

I have a good memory about SOME things LOL