Mine

Star lights twinkles in your eyes
lips tease with tickling tongue
spare not the rods stroking girth
mine the depths of night

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Sharon Ruebel

January 24, 2011 at 1:34 PM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your wonderful win! As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 4:18 PM

D.G.~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2011 at 8:27 AM

Congratulations Debbie, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

January 22, 2011 at 7:39 PM

wow Debbie. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2011 at 3:07 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 1:30 PM

Congratulations, Deb, on your spicy win! Luv ya, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

January 22, 2011 at 9:43 AM

jeepers, lights! you really punped ut up... thumbs up for the win! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

January 22, 2011 at 9:30 AM

Oh my goodness Deb, it is really hot ;-) Congratulations to you

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 22, 2011 at 6:14 AM

Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win ...

Michael J. Falotico

January 22, 2011 at 6:09 AM

This was a hot one!! Congrat my dear...luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

January 22, 2011 at 6:05 AM

Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Debbie Guzzi

January 10, 2011 at 2:26 PM

anyone see the play on words with the title?? mine/ to plumb the depth ..mine/ my own

James Fraser

January 10, 2011 at 2:00 PM

I just love your own comment below Deborah. Phew! hot and spicy, me thinks nicey....:)

Poet Destroyer A

January 4, 2011 at 8:19 PM

Hello, D.G., good luck in the contest,.. enjoyed your poem,.. by the way.. read my latest poem and go correct me.. he he! I can use a little bit of schooling right now,, always,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2011 at 8:54 AM

Passionate..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 3, 2011 at 10:42 PM

ooh, la la, Deb. Such a unique way of putting things!

James Peranteau

January 3, 2011 at 8:01 AM

This write dear poet is just awesome ! Now I will not be the able soul to post a write today; I'll be dwelling on this all day, it is truly a glimps into your poetic gift Debbie ! Into mine favz if'n ya don't mind ! much love and a very happy New Year to you and yours !!!!! james