Minds

Sunlight blooms, flowers shine My dreams and life combined Leaving my soul vulnerable to pain Young teenage spirit with a mind untamed Understood by none who stayed Misunderstood by those who came Required and designed to succeed through failures Spoken by our great elders But they too, who are wise from time, Dont believe that even the sunlight blooms and flowers can shine.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2014 2:11:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jada :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jada Carter
Date: 5/5/2014 4:12:00 PM

thank you soo much!! I am glad to be apart of this community. I was afraid at first, but I will continue to post :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2014 4:36:00 PM

Hi Jada, the perfect , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ending...

Jada Carter
Date: 5/5/2014 4:13:00 PM

thank you!! I was very nervous, but I will continue and improve as I go. :)

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2014 2:34:00 PM

Jada, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jada Carter
Date: 5/5/2014 4:14:00 PM

thank you sooo much!! I am glad we are "poetry buddies" ! I will continue to post. :)