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Mind the Wet Paint

Sometimes especially on days sunny and so quaint
I feel like tossing my bonnet without restraint
Just exposing my mind freshly vividly bepaint
How else strangers and neighbours can I acquaint

Flowers and sunshine and rainbows on my brain I would paint
Crevasses and all, Chances are I wouldn’t be mistaken for a saint
Maybe passers-by would gawk and possibly even faint
I would prance around hatless not hearing one complaint

Ignoring anyone who would frown thinking I’m attaint
For laughs I might pretend and blow a feint
But I would only laugh so loud ‘cause touched by them I ain’t
In my wildest rowdiest boldest colours without constraint

Imagine all the lovely people I would find
Who are exposing too their painted mind
And much too genuine to be colour-blind
Uplifting to meet kindred minds unconfined
Loving smiling faces of humankind



Read on air by invitation  ~  April 10, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on February 22, 2018 for contest  MIND THE WET PAINT sponsored by VIV WIGLEY  -  RANKED 3RD
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Talbot Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations Line... Mick
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Thank you , Mick. Much appreciated.
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Back to congratulate you on your fine podium win, Line! Great to read your excellent poem once again. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:38 PM
what a fabulous rhyme Line many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Much appreciated.
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, great write. :))
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. Much appreciated.
Steele Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Congrats on your great poem, Line. Enjoyed immensely. Well deserved.
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Thanks, Randy. Much appreciated.
Wigley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on a lovely write, Line, and I do so like your finishing sentiment. A wonderful wish indeed. Thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Viv. What a fun contest that had imaginations rolling.
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 6:27 AM
A colourful rhyme Line. Congratulations Tom
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
Moorman Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Line, how does one respond to such totally wonderfully described images? All I can say is WOW!, you put it in terms that could only draw applause from every reader. Congrats, my friend, on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much, Curtis. Very appreciated.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:25 AM
Congratulations, Line on your great win. Wonderful imagery.
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal. Very appreciated.
Gentry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Delightful poem. Agree, wonderful imagination. Good luck in contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Susan. Much appreciated.
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Brilliant one here, Line! Just love your imagination and fun loving imagery..so very creative! This should do well in the contest, good luck :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Thank you so much, Laura. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Haight Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Such a unique take on the theme, Line! Love the monorhymes too! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Sandra. Much appreciated.
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 8:32 AM
What a lovely poem...
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, SO. It was fun writing the poem.
Adams Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 4:56 PM
I like this. It's a winner in my book. My favorite line was "In my wildest rowdiest boldest colours without constraint" That's some wild colors!!Nice write line....pat
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Hey! Thank you, Pat. Appreciate your fun visit and comment.
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