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Mind the Wet Paint

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Sometimes especially on days sunny and so quaint I feel like tossing my bonnet without restraint Just exposing my mind freshly vividly bepaint How else strangers and neighbours can I acquaint Flowers and sunshine and rainbows on my brain I would paint Crevasses and all, Chances are I wouldn’t be mistaken for a saint Maybe passers-by would gawk and possibly even faint I would prance around hatless not hearing one complaint Ignoring anyone who would frown thinking I’m attaint For laughs I might pretend and blow a feint But I would only laugh so loud ‘cause touched by them I ain’t In my wildest rowdiest boldest colours without constraint Imagine all the lovely people I would find Who are exposing too their painted mind And much too genuine to be colour-blind Uplifting to meet kindred minds unconfined Loving smiling faces of humankind Read on air by invitation ~ April 10, 2022 'POETS HARBOUR' AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on February 22, 2018 for contest MIND THE WET PAINT sponsored by VIV WIGLEY - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 3/24/2018 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations Line... Mick
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thank you , Mick. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2018 10:12:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your fine podium win, Line! Great to read your excellent poem once again. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 1:38:00 PM
what a fabulous rhyme Line many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, great write. :))
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your great poem, Line. Enjoyed immensely. Well deserved.
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thanks, Randy. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on a lovely write, Line, and I do so like your finishing sentiment. A wonderful wish indeed. Thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Viv. What a fun contest that had imaginations rolling.
Date: 3/22/2018 6:27:00 AM
A colourful rhyme Line. Congratulations Tom
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 5:34:00 AM
Line, how does one respond to such totally wonderfully described images? All I can say is WOW!, you put it in terms that could only draw applause from every reader. Congrats, my friend, on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Curtis. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your great win. Wonderful imagery.
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/19/2018 8:20:00 PM
Delightful poem. Agree, wonderful imagination. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/24/2018 7:10:00 PM
Brilliant one here, Line! Just love your imagination and fun loving imagery..so very creative! This should do well in the contest, good luck :)
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Date: 2/24/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 2/23/2018 10:32:00 AM
Such a unique take on the theme, Line! Love the monorhymes too! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/23/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/23/2018 8:32:00 AM
What a lovely poem...
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, SO. It was fun writing the poem.
Date: 2/22/2018 4:56:00 PM
I like this. It's a winner in my book. My favorite line was "In my wildest rowdiest boldest colours without constraint" That's some wild colors!!Nice write line....pat
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Date: 2/22/2018 8:45:00 PM
Hey! Thank you, Pat. Appreciate your fun visit and comment.

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