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Mind the Paint

MIND THE PAINT I know the world may never see The looks of my mind, how could it be But if you could simply take a look It would be like reading an open book You would see words floating around And wonder if my mind is sound Well let me tell you in poetic form It's like the calm before the storm You would see colors of every shade Like a rainbow God may have made You would see lots of happiness and joy Beginning when I was just a boy You would see sadness, sorrow, pain Enough to make one go insane But as you read this open book You may be glad you took a look You would see how I overcame the bad The shame, the guilt and pain I had By the grace of God one thing you'll see Is my home in heaven for eternity 13 March 2018 For the contest sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Date: 4/9/2018 9:52:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Curtis. Well done.
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:49:00 PM
Many congrats Curtis:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your placement with this strong write, Curtis, much enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:00:00 PM
A lovely write. Last 2 verses brought tears... very well written. Good luck in contest. A winner in my book.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/20/2018 5:43:00 AM
Susan, what a sweet comment. I write poems and enter contests in an effort to express my faith in the hope that many who read it will see the truth. Your comment tells me that you already know the truth. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 3/13/2018 7:08:00 PM
Well done expressing your faith, Curtis.. Good luck in the contest… hugs Eve ~`
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/13/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. My faith means a lot to me and Soup gives me an outlet to express it. Thank you so much for caring and approving.
Date: 3/13/2018 1:39:00 PM
Awesome poem, Curtis. A FAVE for me.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/13/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Line! You are so encouragingly kind in your timeliness and your comments. WOW!, a FAVE is humbling. I appreciate it.

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