Mind Games

smiles, but no crow's feet betrayal of body language ---------------------------------- MagiCicada 13 ~ Body & Mind Contest by Maureen McGreavy Placed 1st 24th June 2018

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 8:57:00 AM

Hi Paul, a masterful write my friend, it amazes me how you can use so few words and still get your thought across. Much belated congratulations on your win with this well deserved write. Your artistic talent is always shining. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2018 4:00:00 PM

Thank you once again, Mike. In future I must make sure that I keep the kettle on the fire:) Blessings my friend! // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/8/2018 5:09:00 PM

Three lines challenging your reader's mind! I had to read them over and over! Brilliant and smart write Paul! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Keep shining and stay blessed always.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for rising to the challenge of my three lines, Besma:) I appreciate your delightful comments and congrats. Take care and be blessed. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2018 10:31:00 AM

Some lack the the essentials to play this game. Congrats on a fine win.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2018 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Richard. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 7/8/2018 8:19:00 AM

Such depth to these three lines Paul, I can well see why it was awarded first place. Congratulations my dear friend....Maria hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2018 7:25:00 AM

Excellent. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing it.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/7/2018 9:06:00 AM

but that should mind games be Paul :') puzzles and must squeeze a bit the mind.. like the "no crow's feet" :') Hugs and smiles// Olive_eloi

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2018 3:57:00 AM

So pleased that you found time to stop by and read this wee poem, Olive_eloi:) I know how busy you are, especially now that s/he is on the way:) Take care. Hugs & smiles :) :) ~ paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2018 8:25:00 AM

Love this image!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/7/2018 8:38:00 AM

Thank you for reading and 'loving', Kim. I've had computer problems, and am still catching up with mail and comments! Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/6/2018 7:52:00 AM

Exceptionally deep and insightful poetry my good friend.. You always write with such brilliance, thought and foresight my friend!! A fav...

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. Your encouraging feedback is most welcome...so is the fave!! Best regards to you, my friend. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2018 2:41:00 AM

the eyes tell the real story, paul....congratulations and huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 2:54:00 AM

Thank you for a welcome double-visit, Nette:) Hugs // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/5/2018 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations Paul, a winner in more than one way...

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 1:59:00 AM

Many thanks, Charlie. Your visit is appreciated. // paul

Anil Deo

Date: 7/5/2018 11:46:00 AM

Love the sringing of your words Paul; I need to meditate more on the complete Necklace. shalom, shalom

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 1:57:00 AM

Meditation is beneficial for the mind, Anil. Thank you for reading and liking. Peace be with you // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2018 8:47:00 PM

Clever piece Paul! Thanks for your visit.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2018 1:39:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2018 7:05:00 PM

Nicely played Paul...and I agree with JM...^WW^

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2018 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, WW. Best regards // paul

Chris Hagy

Date: 7/3/2018 4:42:00 PM

Congrats Paul...this says so much!...as a horse woman believe me I know how important body language is!...it's all in the details isn't it...nothing new for me, just visiting on a HOT day...have a good one :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2018 5:01:00 PM

It's a most pleasant surprise to have you stopping by, Chris. Thank you for your feedback. Yes, a rider and horse build a relationship based on body language! It's hot over here, too; good thing I live close to the beach:) Best regards // paul

Chuck Melugin

Date: 7/3/2018 8:59:00 AM

Paul.....My crow's feet are showing! Your poetic prize pierces make believe moments. I dare not pretend!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thank you, Chuck...enjoyed reading your comments with a smile:) Regards // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/2/2018 4:44:00 PM

Awww... very good. Congratulations on your #1 win. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2018 2:45:00 AM

Many thanks, Susan:) Have a lovely day! Regards // paul

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/1/2018 4:31:00 PM

Excellent - a well deserved win.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/1/2018 5:39:00 PM

Many thanks, P.M. Glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2018 3:23:00 PM

- Excellent written, Paul - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/2/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise; your 'excellent' is truly appreciated. Hugs // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/1/2018 2:54:00 PM

This one sparkles! Congratulations on your first place finish Paul! :) xomo

Paul Callus
Date: 7/1/2018 4:58:00 PM

Thank you lots, Maureen. I have been offline because of computer problems...pleased to return and be welcomed by a top placement!! Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/26/2018 5:02:00 PM

Genuine or not, 'tis a skill Paul..like your poetry.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/2/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. Your encouragement is appreciated. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 6/26/2018 7:46:00 AM

Sometimes we smile but our heart is not in it. Who knows what is going on in the lives of others. My husband always says, Trust But Verify. Well done Paul. There are many reason for a fake smile. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 7/2/2018 4:12:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by with meaningful feedback, Judy. A pleasure to have you back:) Regards // paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2018 11:14:00 PM

Sometimes body language say so much more! Awesome write Paul! Hope you have a brilliant day :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2018 1:24:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Wilma:) Hope you too have a lovely day! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2018 3:59:00 PM

wonderfully expressed, paul, as anything fake cannot be masked... huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thank you, Nette; some masks are see-through! Hugs // paul

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 7:48:00 AM

What's behind the counterfeit smile. That's what your write left me thinking Paul.. a great meditative piece!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 2:50:00 AM

I will leave you to your musing, my friend:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/25/2018 7:27:00 AM

Body Games, Paul.GL in the contest.Regards.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2018 2:51:00 AM

Thank you, Rajat. Have a nice day, my friend. // paul