Mill Wheel

“The Mill wheel wouldn’t turn until the Spring”
“Old River’s” frozen heart a yearly thing
cold solace of deep snow a lonely gift
to those with ugly memories to sift.

For wheels that grind the truth in darkened minds
to sift the chaff of memories gone blind
will place a ghastly crust upon pure snow
and on the wind the question “Did you know?”

‘Whispers ran through the town from door to door’
lone footprints in the snow at rumors core
the rabid tongues of venom’s righteous quest
condemned sweet mercy’s visits as a test

and so beside the silence of the wheel
she hid the feelings “they” denied she feel.
Spring thaw, a time of which nobody speaks
‘Ice melts, revealing secrets – the wheel creaks’


©6/24/2018

for Viv Wigley – One, Nine, Sixteen V3.0 – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:28 AM
I like where you took the theme, John. Congrats on your podium win! Sandra
George   Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:45 AM
I would have placed this first. BRILLIANT, John. Sincerely, Elaine
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely, poetic. Enjoyed.
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Great write, John, love that first verse, congrats on your win and thanks for entering my humble contest. regards, Viv
Man Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Hey John.. I loved reading your poem over a cup of hot coffee this morning. Your write is interesting and it was a joy to read!
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