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Out racing on a long-stemmed flight, I heard the air of duskfall snap With warm murmurings that delight, To let the jaybird's croon recap A rustling through the meadow shade, Where silver huffs of evening glow Past smokey miles and frosted jade, A drive where cornfields bend to row. This fidgin not quite in between While tailight of clouds have sailed, And far out through a winding stream My gal waits for a kiss, delayed. Groove It Contest of nette onclaud from Leon Datu 9/29/13 ---Country Genre

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Date: 10/30/2013 12:24:00 PM
Hello Leon, , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:03:00 PM
Leon. Great piece. I enjoyed reading. Good job on your placement. Very nice! CTB
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:51:00 AM
Leon, lovely verse ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:07:00 AM
I love the different directions we have all taken listening to the same music!! What a great poem for the contest........well done!
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Date: 10/28/2013 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Leon
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:06:00 PM
beautiful imagery in this lovely poem...congrats on your win :)
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