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Migration

You have left it too late to go and take wing or haul yourself across the chilly mountains. Already the mornings are thick with frost and melt slowly in the shadows of a fleeing sun. You should have gone when first you felt the distances grow and fill with silence, when a cold indifference settled the trees as all turned inward and let go of what had once reached towards a welcoming sky. The land is bare now, hollowed out to hold the husks of things outgrown and left behind. Vacated shells twitch like puppets gloved by a bitter wind. You have lost the knowledge of where to go, that other place, not here - but somewhere else, known only by the restlessness that you sometimes feel pacing the narrowing confines of yourself.

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Date: 4/4/2023 11:38:00 PM
I get it! (Or my own interpretation) Sometimes I'm almost confused by it, like I've woke from a dream and found myself somewhere that doesn't make sense as it doesn't match the sense of adventure my path appeared to have at the outset. I make very sensible choices for someone seemingly erratic. Rock solid ones in fact. I sometimes think I should be like a romanticised littlest hobo from the old TV show. But I'm rooted here and if I wasn't I'd quickly be rooted on my next stop.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Dilly for getting into this poem, it has obviously taken you to places, triggered a few thoughts. Do hope its been a worthwhile , very much value your visit. Good to know that a poem speaks sometimes.
Date: 9/2/2022 4:38:00 PM
Enjoyed the mood and tone of your poem. Autumn has become my favorite season after many years living in the tropics. I especially relate to the dormancy and renewal. Quite beautiful. Nice to meet you. SuZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/7/2022 9:21:00 PM
Very much appreciate your comments and that something of the mood that carried it resonated. Good to know one's words find an appreciative ear out there...gets lonely otherwise. Regards, Paul
Date: 9/2/2022 3:59:00 PM
Indeed we can get lost in the confines of oneself, well done
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/7/2022 9:24:00 PM
Thankyou for your response Always a challenge to find a way through the entanglements of the self. Regards, Paul

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