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Midnight Valentine

I lay amongst the satin sheets with thoughts of you in your loving embrace, melting in hues of blue. Your lips upon mine as my body would ignite; my blushed face buried in your neck as you'd squeezed tight. You did not need to tell me twice that you loved me, for it was in your smile for all the world to see. You were the bright skies that made me rise at sunrise, the caring breath in my lungs that made the earth rise. If I could rewind time to feel one more tender kiss upon my lips, I would thank God, for it's you I miss. 2/1/2019

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Date: 2/5/2019 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful, lovely and loving, and kinda hot!That 4th couplet is magnificent--congrats on your win, Eve....
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Date: 2/4/2019 7:01:00 AM
Oh how wonderful it would be if you could have him back for one moment of bliss, I am sure he longs for the same , heaven must be planting flowers for your reunion dear friend. What a touching write, Loved it Eve, you were the Eve of his joyful days, Congrats. xo
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve!
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Date: 2/3/2019 10:51:00 AM
I love to read true love! You made me smile With your beautiful words! Thank you, and congratulations on your win! .........Sherilynn
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Date: 2/3/2019 5:28:00 AM
This I simply beautiful, Eve, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/3/2019 3:35:00 AM
Hi Eve, Such a warm, loving couplet and such heartfelt longing. It made me cry towards the end! I understand that congratulations are in order - be blessed Eve. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 2/2/2019 8:16:00 PM
Such heartfelt words of missing and longing and remembering. I deeply feel your pain, Eve. Congratulations on your podium placement. Love and Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/2/2019 10:01:00 AM
Beyond words. You made your love eternal Eve :)
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:09:00 AM
You pour out heart here...Nice one
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Date: 2/1/2019 10:36:00 PM
Ah, Eve, another tribute to your love. What a glorious poem, I do believe this one made it straight to haven today, my friend. I can feel it.
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Date: 2/1/2019 6:47:00 PM
Wow Eve so beautiful!! your words flow like the river my friend
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:48:00 PM
So full of the longing of separated lovers, love the line 'bright skies that made me rise at sunrise' - has a lovely flow, good luck in the contest!
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