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Midnight Valentine

Like fresh water from springs below a lake There is much love to give, but who will take? shuffling ‘neath neon lights or lurking in alleyways Myra roams urban streets Kay’s large house seems so empty Conveniences money provides but it’s affection she wishes to share judgmental parents disowned her for handouts Myra pleads fearing the fate of her unborn so young was Kay’s husband struck down before his first gray hair she sobbed when told her womb would be barren lashed by winter’s icy whip Myra mingles with the homeless stopping at shelters to eat for two until at a soup kitchen one day a compassionate volunteer named Kay offers to share her ample home Like fresh water from springs below a lake There is overflowing love to give, but who will take? *January 31, 2019 For Chantelle’s Midnight Valentine Contest

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Date: 9/22/2019 7:23:00 PM
What a beautiful story of two lonely people finding loved shared in their hearts. I keep looking for poems I may have missed reading Carolyn and this is one. A beauty! : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/2/2019 7:11:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, your golden heart shines through in the lines of this wonderful poem. Hearts that sing shall always find what they seek in the end. Kay and Myra find each other and the loneliness is gone. An excellent midnight Valentine. this one reads like a winner Carolyn. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....mike. XX
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Date: 2/1/2019 11:01:00 AM
There is always a heart that needs another, and in this case you have made two persons very happy, Carolyn. Your kind character is reflected in this touching poem. I love the opening/closing couplet! Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:10:00 AM
Who...may that be...I like the style and message of your write... you're right there's a lot of love to give...but who will take...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/1/2019 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for visiting, Arturo. It's nice to see you back here sharing some new work with us!
Date: 1/31/2019 11:35:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful; overflowing with warmth and love. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/31/2019 7:46:00 PM
someone said a word for this which I also totally agree with: Poignant . This is truly a poignant poem, Carolyn. I know what a feeling person you are too.
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Date: 1/31/2019 7:42:00 PM
I see, feel, and hear the footsteps of O'Henry, of Theodore Dreiser (esp. in 'Sister Carrie'), and even of Dickens, (albeit a female Dickens, if that works for you). Carolyn, this is my nominee for the poem of the month!! (if anyone bothered to ask me). Absolute FAVE FAVE FAVE. Magnificently woven. :) gw
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/31/2019 8:32:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. I don't really see this as special, just thoughts from the heart.
Date: 1/31/2019 6:32:00 PM
A poignant piece which shows that though "love springs up like fresh water" not all will taste it..Well penned Carolyn
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Date: 1/31/2019 6:27:00 PM
- A great and moving little story, dear Carolyn ... we all need love :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2019 4:26:00 PM
Lovely story Caroline, with a happy ending too. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:43:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, A very sad but ultimately a very compassionate poem and so excellent a write dear Carolyn - People should not be lonely on such a romantic evening - So Happy for Kay. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:39:00 PM
Enjoyed the tale--especially the happy ending.
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